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StatueLover
7/5/22, 5:57 PM
I love the tease. More please
7/5/22, 5:46 PM
now I really want to see the police changing
7/5/22, 3:51 PM
A brilliant ending! As others have said, the slow burn made it all the better, because the explosion of sex EVERYWHERE felt more realistic after everyone was holding back. And as always, there’s the patented Hypnothrill brand of erotic terror—the sight of the resistance (and, going by the suited gentleman, anyone who escaped the subliminal messages) being rounded up and *forced* to submit was horrifying. In a twisted way, that was a slow burn too: at first the mastermind behind the plot used covert messages and word of mouth, but with each chapter, we saw him growing bolder and more corrupted as his plan worked (from guys chatting to Instagram posts to major TV commercials to outright seizure). I can’t help but shudder at the thought of that, because we see it happening, don’t we? People getting bolder and more openly hateful…only you could pair a sexy Speedo story with political commentary, Hypnothrill. Well done!

7/5/22, 5:13 PM
@Feed Your Head It's interesting, because although the story got fleshed out some interesting ways as I sat down and began writing each chapter, all the stuff you mention was in the original 1000-word outline I wrote back in 2020. I think the only major change I made to that was that originally Reed was the last holdout in the office, but I thought it would make the story hotter if he was the second-to-last to fall, then helped his friend discover the need for speedo.
7/5/22, 4:27 PM
also, did Wes also buy an american flag speedo?

7/5/22, 5:09 PM
@darkblade2814 For a second, I thought about putting Wes in something tech/gamer related. (Maybe a speedo with a pattern of 0s and 1s on it?) But then I decided that would be too cutesy and left that descriptive detail to the reader's imagination.
Anonymous
7/5/22, 4:22 PM
This is one of the hottest stories on this site. Any chance there'll ever be more chapters?
7/5/22, 3:56 PM
Great orgy to end with!
7/5/22, 3:54 PM
Really like how this is going. Don Trujilo is an amazing character. And I love Lou,it's clever to have a law enforcement slave in his pocket Can't wait to see how this goes
7/5/22, 3:51 PM
I just put on my black speedo, and won't be taking it off until I get to the beach on Saturday.Not wearing anything else. except my speedo when I go to the beach.
Anonymous
7/5/22, 3:41 PM
So worth the wait. Now where did I leave that speedo?
7/5/22, 3:39 PM
Nicely dark and dirty