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Jul 3, 2022
7/4/22, 5:17 AM
Oh Lord above. Oh LORD. This was hot, certainly, but it was also *terrifying.* The moment when the door opened to reveal the rest of the prison, and the image of hundreds of bodies crammed into small cells, endlessly screaming and masturbating like apes appeared…absolutely chilling. I liked the surprise ending, too, especially when the Warden’s language began to shift. Positively brilliant!

7/4/22, 10:06 PM
@Feed Your Head. I'm getting better at toe-ing the line between the storytelling, the cock pumping sleaze and the odd darker turn so I'm glad i was able to _terrify_ and turn you on at the same time!

7/5/22, 6:49 AM
@GoonNoob You did at that! Well done...
7/5/22, 5:20 AM
Foreshadowing of a 3-way involving Josh… that would be a pretty hot scene. I know I’d be too distracted to write it. Jack gets high marks for having sufficient self-control to pound the keyboard and keeping us on edge.
7/5/22, 5:11 AM
Too bad he didn't fuck the god. Hehe Good story!
7/5/22, 4:38 AM
Hot. I just wish there was more of a sexual element.
offeringservice26
7/5/22, 3:30 AM
I loved this! It touched on one of my favorite sub-genres which is hot dudes who get so insanely horny that they throw themselves at ugly/undesirable guys. That's always turned me on. Well done!
7/4/22, 2:33 PM
[distant chanting slowly getting closer] ASS ASS ASS ASS ASS also holy shit broseph you're so fuckin' good at the wild intensity here, I'm takin' notes for sure 👀💖

7/5/22, 1:49 AM
@Cumguts Wow, thanks!
Anonymous
7/4/22, 1:13 PM
All the changes done to Carter are things I love to see, but due to how sympatethic you made him I still want to see him get away from this with his core intact. Rusty doesnt deserve him. I vote for some spell casting abilities.

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@ Whoops! I might have miscalculated in my attempt to do something other than "homophobe jock gets turned out"...
7/4/22, 8:26 AM
Custom special ability!!! I love the creativity you have!!!!

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Horn Thanks!
7/4/22, 3:17 AM
I’m loving this! Please keep going

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Andavid Thanks! I'm waiting for votes, but I have a general idea for next chapter.
7/4/22, 1:48 AM
@Maskedhimbo oh I like that idea! Ass upgrade would be my vote too. I’m so conflicted! Love the changes Carter is going through, but I definitely don’t want to see Rusty winning in the end. By the way, this story has been awesome. Checks off so many boxes for me. Most of all, seeing this big (mostly) straight guy being converted into a needy, sub bottom is SO well written. Amazing character development!

7/5/22, 1:47 AM
@Phantom Passenger Thanks! I wonder if I made Rusty too much of a jerk and Carter too likable...