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7/4/22, 2:33 PM
[distant chanting slowly getting closer] ASS ASS ASS ASS ASS also holy shit broseph you're so fuckin' good at the wild intensity here, I'm takin' notes for sure 👀💖

7/5/22, 1:49 AM
@Cumguts Wow, thanks!
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7/4/22, 1:13 PM
All the changes done to Carter are things I love to see, but due to how sympatethic you made him I still want to see him get away from this with his core intact. Rusty doesnt deserve him. I vote for some spell casting abilities.

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@ Whoops! I might have miscalculated in my attempt to do something other than "homophobe jock gets turned out"...
7/4/22, 8:26 AM
Custom special ability!!! I love the creativity you have!!!!

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Horn Thanks!
7/4/22, 3:17 AM
I’m loving this! Please keep going

7/5/22, 1:48 AM
@Andavid Thanks! I'm waiting for votes, but I have a general idea for next chapter.
7/4/22, 1:48 AM
@Maskedhimbo oh I like that idea! Ass upgrade would be my vote too. I’m so conflicted! Love the changes Carter is going through, but I definitely don’t want to see Rusty winning in the end. By the way, this story has been awesome. Checks off so many boxes for me. Most of all, seeing this big (mostly) straight guy being converted into a needy, sub bottom is SO well written. Amazing character development!

7/5/22, 1:47 AM
@Phantom Passenger Thanks! I wonder if I made Rusty too much of a jerk and Carter too likable...
7/2/22, 10:08 PM
I think the custom special ability is the only option that might allow Carter to fight back. Rusty needs to be punished for his actions and Carter needs to be safe. On the last chapter I felt like there's a chance Dusty will help, and I think that will be very interesting and hot (loving dom tops are the best dom tops)

7/3/22, 1:32 AM
@Reader If you like loving dom tops, I think you might like my Magic Textbook story!

7/3/22, 11:48 AM
@bluesuedewho Ohhh yes please. I'll read it now!

7/3/22, 3:03 PM
About that, I can’t wait for the next chapter of Magic Textbook, man. Marc is my favorite character and I’ve been wanting for him to fuck the brains out of MC and I have a feeling this will happen in the next chapter. Please don’t take too long to post that :) cheers @bluesuedewho

7/5/22, 1:46 AM
@Elmara Thanks! I'm trying to get something written for the contest, but I do still have plans for Textbook.
7/3/22, 10:27 AM
Thanks for the chapter! I love multi-part curses like that "Dumb and Full of Cum" effect! My vote goes for ass upgrade.

7/5/22, 1:44 AM
@drummer Glad you like it! I enjoy squirmy curse stories, but this is basically the first one I've written.
7/5/22, 1:41 AM
All of the ass play in this chapter made me wonder of Henry's hypnotic touch could affect the internals of the person he's playing with. That matter I'm wondering if coming inside one of his toys reinforces anything or if it's just ordinary come. The mysteries of it all...
7/3/22, 3:11 AM
Rusty has a lot in the tank, why should we choose? ;) Carter can grab a Custom Special Ability to improve casting early on, but when Rusty keeps pumping him full of more and more cum and his brains start to really give out, I think Carter’s going to invest HEAVY in ass upgrades. Besides, when he gets really dull he’s not going to know upgrading a 5 to a 6 is pushing his ass beyond human limitations… that’s a very exciting idea

7/5/22, 1:36 AM
@brium Plenty of XP, we'll have to see how Carter uses it!
7/5/22, 1:35 AM
"It would probably rip a hole in the fabric of the time-space continuum and that was a level of crisis that he just wasn’t emotionally prepared to deal with at the minute." I can relate to this! A soulbound former murderous Roman emperor? A baking competition? Stakes are higher than ever! Can't wait for what comes next and Vivian being humiliated anew.