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blu
7/4/22, 4:16 AM
Great story can't wait to know what will happen next
7/4/22, 1:38 AM
Very hot, especially the prison scenes, those were seriously very well done. One of the hotter stories in the contest for sure, though I see more dom-topness than negative toxicity.
7/3/22, 8:10 PM
I liked the world-building you wove into the story, as you have with other stories. This would make for a good sci-fi premise, with or without Agent 88's erotic adventures as the fat, mustachioed consort of a handsome tycoon with an appetite for hefty older gentlemen. Age progression stories have always fascinated me, but they usually end with the young man forlorn and fat, mourning the loss of his youth and gym-toned physique. Your characters see their fate as a new door that's been opened, as they find enjoyment in their new forms. The story keeps going after he gets old and fat, and he finds real happiness. I have Silver's taste in men as well, and the sex between him and 88 is really well written. TLDR: Dystopian Grandpa Erotica Done Right.

7/3/22, 11:27 PM
@The Sugar Cat I get that there's satisfaction in the humiliation of a young arrogant man, but I never enjoyed those kinds of endings. I can't see it as anything other than a good thing, I suppose I am too infatuated old bears to see the negatives. Thank you for you kind words.

7/4/22, 12:52 AM
@BigMetalHusband The humiliation angle is there and I do love it....so much media is about cocky young upstarts making fools of the clueless old guys, and AP/WG stories are a refreshing pie in the face. Agent 88 comes across as a nihilistic, macho antihero, and the royal guards are like so many other larger than life fantasy heroes. These stories make bumbling fools of them, and they find out too late that they are in over their heads, but end up being taken under the wing of stern father figures who show them the errors of their ways. That's how it goes for a lot of men as they get older, and they look back on their youth with a mix of nostalgia and embarrassment.
7/3/22, 11:30 PM
Ass upgrade, though one that is a special ability that sorta counters what Rusty is doing. Maybe an passive which turns (temporarily) submissiveness into dominance, though mainly focused on dominating the one fucking. Or one that is a 'temptation' and would make Dusty interested in defying Rusty since he'd be under control of Carter's ass? I don't want Rusty to win(like others), and Carter getting an ability which makes the weakness Rusty gave him a strength against him would be nice.
Jul 3, 2022
7/3/22, 6:32 PM
One of the hottest stories I've read on here in quite a while. I love the use of gooner slang in the story, and unlike Heru Kane, I loved the twist at the end.

7/3/22, 11:06 PM
@Hypnothrill thank you for the high praise! I'm very versed in gooner slang lol and I've learned my lesson with other stories that the people want to see the antagonists get their cumupence sooner rather than later
Jul 3, 2022
Kip
7/3/22, 5:10 PM
Oh my GOD that was hot. Great idea, everything was as close to perfect as it could get. Well done!

7/3/22, 11:04 PM
@Kip thank you :) I certainly enjoyed writing this one and getting into character ;)
Jul 3, 2022
Anonymous
7/3/22, 4:57 PM
What does enm mean

7/3/22, 11:03 PM
it was a wrong tag.
7/3/22, 10:45 PM
Hot hot hot, I loved it! ^_^ thos scratches all the right spots for me :D
Apr 18, 2019
7/3/22, 10:45 PM
Insanely hot !
7/3/22, 10:20 PM
I recommend the custom spelling, but since Carter is becoming the dumb jock slave, he should let his master make the decision for him. This reinforces the dom/sub status and still provides creativity on what could happen. And since Carter is completely getting it from the rear, may I suggest chasity be introduced? Perhaps some more kink wear like a leather jockstrap or some latex?