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7/3/22, 7:26 PM
I think this is my favorite story for this contest. You really nailed the theme of toxic masculine predators getting what they deserve. I hope you consider following up on this.
7/3/22, 7:13 PM
an exceptional faery tale. You do need to format it for easier reading but well done. Looking forward to more!!
7/3/22, 7:02 PM
So so so good!!!!
7/3/22, 6:41 PM
Great setup! Love the old-timy detective approach and the fact that there's a Himbotown, a place I hope we'll be visiting a lot. Great job on the himbo too! Can't wait to see what develops and the himbos we see along the way.
7/3/22, 6:37 PM
Such a great story! I love how Jese is aware and yet can't stop himself from wanting it all. How easily David got into his mind from that first interaction. Nice red hearing with the cameraman, the whole scene on the car, with Jese becoming more and more aware that he is turning into one of David's pornstar sluts was ecellent. I was sad in the end that Jese would go back home. Hopefully he returns and brings back a friend. Or his housemate. Kudos Autodream, this was another amazing story that keeps me reading in batches to recuperate in between. Your #1 non stalker fan.
7/3/22, 5:26 PM
Such a great next chapter in one of my favorite series! 😉😵‍💫
7/3/22, 3:56 PM
Reed is almost there, he's at the tipping point, and now his dad has joined, how could he possible not join them in gay bliss? Clark overtly flirting witht he boss and Reed just going shirtless cause it's speedo weather and still not realizing how far along he is is just so perfectly hot! One more day and Reed will fnd the need and will finally have no more worries.
Anonymous
7/3/22, 2:35 PM
Want to see, hear, read, know that Supz enjoys all the sex action and wants more.
Anonymous
7/3/22, 1:52 PM
Ass upgrades. Make it bubblier and able to drain power from Rusty
easdf
7/2/22, 10:05 PM
God I hate Rusty. I vote for Custom Special Ability as well. I want Carter to win and get out safe. I hate it when the bad guy wins and Carter deserves better than being dumbed down and forced to have another persona that he explicitly said he did not want multiple times. all I can hope for is that like many stories before, those who sin with Hubris will find the world turning on them, and in this case it is even shown in its original ancient Greece form.

7/3/22, 1:31 AM
@easdf I wasn't expecting literary references like this on my silly smut story...

easdf
7/3/22, 11:46 AM
@bluesuedewho I really like to analyze stories and movies 😅​ In my opinion, adding elements from Greek tragedies without even trying is a great sign of talent!