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Anonymous
7/3/22, 2:35 PM
Want to see, hear, read, know that Supz enjoys all the sex action and wants more.
Anonymous
7/3/22, 1:52 PM
Ass upgrades. Make it bubblier and able to drain power from Rusty
easdf
7/2/22, 10:05 PM
God I hate Rusty. I vote for Custom Special Ability as well. I want Carter to win and get out safe. I hate it when the bad guy wins and Carter deserves better than being dumbed down and forced to have another persona that he explicitly said he did not want multiple times. all I can hope for is that like many stories before, those who sin with Hubris will find the world turning on them, and in this case it is even shown in its original ancient Greece form.

7/3/22, 1:31 AM
@easdf I wasn't expecting literary references like this on my silly smut story...

easdf
7/3/22, 11:46 AM
@bluesuedewho I really like to analyze stories and movies 😅​ In my opinion, adding elements from Greek tragedies without even trying is a great sign of talent!
7/2/22, 3:54 PM
Oh yes! Looks like my suggestion made it in, though thankfully with an option for Carter to take and win over Rusty. As far as I know, only the Character Carter gets his mind dumbed down, but in a way, Carter himself is safe and is simply forced to roleplay Character Carter. Hopefully. Sure he himself would probably be affected with his other half's dumber mind, but if he could just focus on being himself, he can make it. Custom Special Ability to improve casting. That seems like the option that would allow him to craft a Special Ability that could save him. Or he could purchase a Special Ability to become a monster.

7/2/22, 6:23 PM
@ChronoSeth Yeah, this, for sure. Improve his casting, I still want to see him find a way out, to outdo Rusty and trap him a bit more. Nobody said Rusty's own cum attributes couldn't affect himself, either. Could always end up eating Carter out after the fucking, accidentally triggering himself with it.

easdf
7/3/22, 11:37 AM
@ChronoSeth It's actually a great question. Do we know everything will go back to normal once the game ends? Also, how does the game end? Technically I guess Rusty, as the DM has the option of continuing the game forever therefore enslaving Carter (hopefully this won't be the case).
7/3/22, 8:14 AM
Looking forward to reading more of this. 😏

7/3/22, 10:42 AM
thanks for the support @NeedControlling i hope you'll enjoy where I'm going with this
Martin
7/3/22, 5:38 AM
Hot and cute!

7/3/22, 10:41 AM
thanks for the support @Martin :D
Anonymous
7/3/22, 10:28 AM
Thank you for continuing this. I can't wait for the next chapter
7/3/22, 9:03 AM
Please sort out your paragraphs. I literally can’t read this.
7/3/22, 4:57 AM
But what about Martin's own transformation, does it continue or is it just a drone converter?

7/3/22, 7:09 AM
@Maxigay After Antoine's transformation, Martin's body changed a bit more. It would be the same after Alexis' . But a proper transformation will occur in the 4th and last part of Martin's story arc
7/3/22, 6:55 AM
A great chapter, very fun to see Reed coming to admire the bulges and bums around him, even if he doesn't realise how far along he is. Eagerly anticipating the moment he succumbs to the siren song of a skimpy speedo, and then wonders what on earth he was fighting against so hard.