Recent Comments

Evan
7/2/22, 5:19 AM
I really enjoyed this. Very hot. And a great, slow build. Reaching out and expecting nothing but finding he couldn't or didn't really want to cancel was great. And then everything escalating slowly but naturally. Even if Jese didn't realised he'd already been hypnotised to cooperate. Or to think the camera man's cock was a dildo to play with. Like Hypnothrill, I had a moment wondering whether David was just a front-man and the real hypnosis was by the camera man. David was the bait and puppet. Either way would have been hot but even being wrong, I enjoyed the straight-forward lack of twist. Just a sweet story of a boy with a hypno fetish becoming a gay cockslut and a mindless slave to a porn star's cock. Great work!
rwriter51
7/2/22, 5:07 AM
I love that you're telling the story in the old "gumshoe," B-movie style. It definitely has grabbed my interest and is a story I will definitely follow.
Anonymous
7/2/22, 5:04 AM
Love the way he slides increasingly helplessly toward the need for speedo. The tension is built up so we’ll. it gets hotter with every instalment.
7/2/22, 4:14 AM
Love the way the main guy dominates dudes here. So sexy. I especially liked it when he called over his boy and he stopped everything he was doing to obey and serve. I really like how this was a dom top POV as they are rarer then subs on this site.
7/2/22, 3:55 AM
I'm gonna stop here as I'm not a fan of the loss of control that is happening to the main. Him being the dominant one was hot. Rare it seems is the dominant top the pov so that element was great here and now he is on a spiral path down. Anyway from one to here was hot.
7/2/22, 2:04 AM
I’m impressed as always. Who knew the nerd was packing. Sammy playing with his new daddy toy, Jon getting roughhoused by his nerd daddy. Poor Eli. Can’t wait for the teammate to discover John’s new talents. I got extra excited when you foreshadowed a bus ride, a hotel possible orgy a possible team whore. I’m not sure what is next, but I know Jack delivers. Awesomeness.
7/2/22, 2:01 AM
i can't wait for more from you Baralai! it's so nice to see you back. This was a great story with such excellent worldbuilding, it could stay right here or it could expand to more chapters and that's just *chefs kiss* perfect. A wonderful addition to your excellent collection of stories.
Anonymous
7/2/22, 1:58 AM
Spectacular. Great worldbuilding, clear characters, hot concept, a complete story with a beginning, middle and end. More things written like this, please!
7/2/22, 1:51 AM
This was really good - both hot and actually narratively compelling, which is a rare combination! Hope to see this continue
Anonymous
7/2/22, 12:54 AM
Great start, dying to read the next instalment!