Recent Comments

7/2/22, 4:14 AM
Love the way the main guy dominates dudes here. So sexy. I especially liked it when he called over his boy and he stopped everything he was doing to obey and serve. I really like how this was a dom top POV as they are rarer then subs on this site.
7/2/22, 3:55 AM
I'm gonna stop here as I'm not a fan of the loss of control that is happening to the main. Him being the dominant one was hot. Rare it seems is the dominant top the pov so that element was great here and now he is on a spiral path down. Anyway from one to here was hot.
7/2/22, 2:04 AM
I’m impressed as always. Who knew the nerd was packing. Sammy playing with his new daddy toy, Jon getting roughhoused by his nerd daddy. Poor Eli. Can’t wait for the teammate to discover John’s new talents. I got extra excited when you foreshadowed a bus ride, a hotel possible orgy a possible team whore. I’m not sure what is next, but I know Jack delivers. Awesomeness.
7/2/22, 2:01 AM
i can't wait for more from you Baralai! it's so nice to see you back. This was a great story with such excellent worldbuilding, it could stay right here or it could expand to more chapters and that's just *chefs kiss* perfect. A wonderful addition to your excellent collection of stories.
Anonymous
7/2/22, 1:58 AM
Spectacular. Great worldbuilding, clear characters, hot concept, a complete story with a beginning, middle and end. More things written like this, please!
7/2/22, 1:51 AM
This was really good - both hot and actually narratively compelling, which is a rare combination! Hope to see this continue
Anonymous
7/2/22, 12:54 AM
Great start, dying to read the next instalment!
7/2/22, 12:46 AM
More please…..I can’t wait to see what happens next…..
7/2/22, 12:34 AM
Oh, now will Daddy keep John for himself or will he share his treasure. Will John be a treasure or trash. It is up to Jack Parker.
7/1/22, 11:37 PM
Amazing. Johns hungry cunt is in for an adventure at college. Lucky bitch. And lucky me for getting a front row seat. Thanks Jack.