Recent Comments

Evan
6/30/22, 5:41 AM
Great beginning. Hints at some of the lore plus sexy pleasure and pheromones. I look forward to reading more!

7/1/22, 10:01 PM
@Evan Thanks! I don't write very often but I like dropping in lore and world-building info when I can.
6/30/22, 4:09 AM
Great start! I hope you continue this and show us more of the alien takeover.

7/1/22, 10:00 PM
@Hypnothrill You are one of my favorite authors on this site, and I am so glad you enjoyed my story!
6/30/22, 3:54 AM
Nice start. I love reading about straight jock turning gay. I also love it when they are changed by a outside force. I can't wait for the next part.

7/1/22, 9:58 PM
@Redcoma100 Thanks for commenting! Yeah I'm trying to get the second part finished, it's just been slow goings with my job draining all motivation to write. But I'll get there!
7/1/22, 9:56 PM
now I have to wonder what is going to happen to Wes and Connor now too
7/1/22, 8:45 PM
"Man, what I great story. I wonder who wro- Oh shit! He's back!"
Kip
7/1/22, 8:40 PM
Awesome. Completely awesome. I was hoping Reed would fire off a gigantic orgasm at the end though! I love the way you change your POV and other half-changed men’s minds slowly aa they’re still resisting the main focus of the story. You always do that so well. SO hot. Great chapter, and I’m looking forward to all the sex coming in the next installment! 😁
Dec 22, 2019
7/1/22, 8:19 PM
Please, continue!
7/1/22, 7:44 PM
A near perfect story, hampered just a little by typos, but you can go back and fix those whenever. Definitely hoping for more set in this world.
7/1/22, 4:13 PM
Great story! Wish I could find my own HypnoDavid. Hoping for Part 2 soon.
6/28/22, 6:18 AM
So...wait there were other chapters that were removed because of Patreon's guidelines right? Are they no longer avaliable or would they be avaliable in another method or place?

7/1/22, 2:48 PM
@Questionablecontent No longer available, sorry.