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KhrizzzToephur
7/1/22, 6:45 PM
*Applause* 👏

7/1/22, 10:07 PM
@KhrizzzToephur Thank you!
7/1/22, 12:25 AM
A very promising start! The tentacles on the dicks was an original twist. Hope you continue soon!

7/1/22, 10:07 PM
@Essex Thank you! Yeah I thought dick tentacles would be different and neat!
6/30/22, 10:21 AM
The beginning was like a dream. A perfect opening.

7/1/22, 10:05 PM
@Dream maker Thanks a bunch! When I originally wrote this story, I put so much effort into it. I'm glad you like it!
6/30/22, 9:32 AM
Awesome! The guys begging to be transformed into muscled-up drones was particularly hot. Amazing work! :)

7/1/22, 10:03 PM
@Feed Your Head Thanks for the comment! Yeah I thought the two guys wanting to be turned was hot too. Haha
6/30/22, 5:43 AM
perfect, can't wait for more!

7/1/22, 10:02 PM
@jakey I'm glad you liked it! Hopefully I'll have more soon!
Evan
6/30/22, 5:41 AM
Great beginning. Hints at some of the lore plus sexy pleasure and pheromones. I look forward to reading more!

7/1/22, 10:01 PM
@Evan Thanks! I don't write very often but I like dropping in lore and world-building info when I can.
6/30/22, 4:09 AM
Great start! I hope you continue this and show us more of the alien takeover.

7/1/22, 10:00 PM
@Hypnothrill You are one of my favorite authors on this site, and I am so glad you enjoyed my story!
6/30/22, 3:54 AM
Nice start. I love reading about straight jock turning gay. I also love it when they are changed by a outside force. I can't wait for the next part.

7/1/22, 9:58 PM
@Redcoma100 Thanks for commenting! Yeah I'm trying to get the second part finished, it's just been slow goings with my job draining all motivation to write. But I'll get there!
7/1/22, 9:56 PM
now I have to wonder what is going to happen to Wes and Connor now too
7/1/22, 8:45 PM
"Man, what I great story. I wonder who wro- Oh shit! He's back!"