Recent Comments

EntrancedGay92
7/1/22, 1:56 PM
I loved this story a lot. It reminded me of my first ever encounter with a hypnotist in real life, minus the porn of course. I like when stories have protagonists who are already into hypnosis, makes it a lot hotter. I will say, at one point, I thought HypnoDavid was just a hypnotized pawn for the camera man; especially since he was just silently driving around while the cameraman had his way with Jesse. Great job!
Evan
7/1/22, 4:45 AM
A beautiful chapter. And way to go Pete! Such an observant and wise himbo. And there it is. I we hoping we would hear about Mark soon. This was a lovely take on a gift for a day and how Phil took it when it wore off was lovely. His desire to take away Felicia's pain was nature and noble too. I love these characters and Justin is fun. The romantic and caring aspects of this story are so wonderful. I can't wait for another chapter.

7/1/22, 1:24 PM
@Evan Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter! Clearly, Pete is wiser than anyone knows (probably even himself :P), but what exactly does he know? Phil is a standup man, who, like Sam, has had to deal with a lot of pain and hurt, but when it comes down it, he makes the choice to spare the pain he caused on others before anything else. That's what makes him a great doctor, and a really good guy. Both him and Sam deserve each other. Justin was fun, a much needed help for Sam, who's getting busier and whose life gets more and more "exciting"? Now to work on more romantic, fun and caring, and hopefully in under 30k words. On with the circus!
HypnoSub16
7/1/22, 12:18 PM
Dang, I was really enjoying the series. Super sad it hasn't been updated in a while. This was lovely though, so keep up the good work :D
7/1/22, 5:07 AM
I’m glad to learn you’re writing again. Your stories are always great reads. I hope to read the next chapters of this and maybe Casey’s Dog Life too!

7/1/22, 9:36 AM
@Rspark thank you very much! I had twenty chapters planned for Casey's Dog Life but I don't know if I'll ever revisit.
7/1/22, 8:37 AM
How can i translate in english?:smiley:
Anonymous
7/1/22, 2:03 AM
This was a very nice, very hot surprise, with a very rare idea, that of somebody with a hypnosis kink actually fulfilling it. Having Jesse go into this knowing exactly what would happen, coming out of it with a master and zero regrets was so hot and a nice change of pace from the normal. You do have a few typos and misspellings (it’s spelled guarantee btw) but nothing that detracts from the story. I really hope you continue this with him going back to Dave permanently.
7/1/22, 12:16 AM
To have such maoepulations with such positiveness; such pathos and reciprocal love in a Cinderella/Evil Queen story makes this just a delight to read. It's not "Out there" requiring a map and reference guide. Good on you!

7/1/22, 1:52 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you so much for your comment! I'm actually thrilled to see you reading my stuff, I've read so much of yours! I'm glad the positiveness, and the fun and the love shine through, it's all about that and sharing it in the end. Thank you again, and I'm glad you're still around GSS, best of luck!
6/29/22, 2:35 PM
I wonder when will it be released

Anonymous
6/30/22, 11:59 PM
Soon hopefully @Erratic101
6/30/22, 6:51 PM
Really glad you guys are enjoying 3rd chapter. 4th chapter is probably going to be the longest so far. And i promise it wont be 3 years before it comes out lol.
Anonymous
6/30/22, 6:48 PM
I really loved this! And I wasn’t expecting it to have a great moral and lesson for all of us at the end. Very well done indeed!