Recent Comments

Evan
6/29/22, 5:22 AM
Always excited to get to read more of this game. Hope our hero clears the dungeon. Sure seems like he's pulling out all the stops. Great series! Thank you.
6/29/22, 5:17 AM
This was a satisfying end to a hot story! To me, this ending didn't feel like either a typical "bad guy wins" ending or "good guy wins" ending (although it's certainly a "good" outcome for Chance). Starting with Travis and continuing throughout the story, we've seen that the people who get the promise(-breaking) power aren't exceptionally evil to begin with; aside from the magical urges to do what you want, there's a whole lot of just plain human temptation to use this kind of power for selfish purposes. Based on that, it's not that surprising that Chance used a loophole to keep access to it, but I didn't see that coming in advance. B.J.'s fate is also not completely comfortable to consider—I think it's hard to argue that the way he and Chance got together wasn't morally messed up, even considering that he's perfectly happy with it now and wouldn't want it any other way. While Chance isn't going wild with power the way Donnie was, should he really have that power even so? Will the setup he has with B.J. be enough to keep him from abusing it? Although I'm reading this for the gay porn, I think it's neat that these kind of topics are kind of left open by the ending (in my interpretation of it at least!). Speaking of gay porn, I was really into the last scene! Nice to see more of B.J. as a subby muscular bottom. I enjoyed all of the changing circumstances he was put in in this story.
6/28/22, 10:59 PM
Fuck I love edging and nutting to your stories! You make my big dumb dick so hard and leaky.
6/28/22, 10:56 PM
loving this series, I'm really glad you're keeping up with it!
Evan
6/28/22, 10:40 PM
Intel achieved and a new social order established. Great chapter!
Martin
6/28/22, 10:26 PM
Wonderful!
Evan
6/28/22, 9:57 PM
Wow. I'm not familiar with the parasite character but I'm getting a sense of what might be going on Either way this is hot as fuck. Tim letting go and getting a little hedonistic is great. Always love your work.
Martin
6/28/22, 9:28 PM
Oh man,,, why did it stop where it did? Your stories are so amazing, so intense. I so much want to be integrated as well...
6/28/22, 9:04 PM
Damn hot dude! Love the way all your stories characters are beginning to weave together. Your a very talented writer. Just fantastic cock throbbing storytelling. I’m an eager fan and follower of Jack Parker’s work.
6/28/22, 8:40 PM
fantastic!