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6/29/22, 2:26 PM
This Chapter: “It’s not fair! Why is my comment section the only one that's been touched!” "Shouldn’t have had a classic meme then." 😌

6/29/22, 2:56 PM
@A Possession A Day Himbo Sun, the myth, the meme, the experience :grin:
6/29/22, 2:44 PM
Still interested to see this continued
6/29/22, 2:35 PM
Oh man what a Hot chapter but im really looking forward to the next one. Superman and HeMan wrestling and fucking in the arena?! Wheres the tickets for front row seats!
6/29/22, 2:24 PM
This is a fantastic chapter. You had me at the opening line. Keep up the great work!
6/29/22, 1:13 PM
Excellent work, looking forward to the next chapter.
6/29/22, 12:19 PM
Great story!! Nutted a great big load to this one. Hope you write some more stories!
6/29/22, 11:08 AM
Please bring apart 2
6/29/22, 11:02 AM
Very nice to see this continued! I love your writing and topics so I am always eager to read them when they are released.
Evan
6/29/22, 5:22 AM
Always excited to get to read more of this game. Hope our hero clears the dungeon. Sure seems like he's pulling out all the stops. Great series! Thank you.
6/29/22, 5:17 AM
This was a satisfying end to a hot story! To me, this ending didn't feel like either a typical "bad guy wins" ending or "good guy wins" ending (although it's certainly a "good" outcome for Chance). Starting with Travis and continuing throughout the story, we've seen that the people who get the promise(-breaking) power aren't exceptionally evil to begin with; aside from the magical urges to do what you want, there's a whole lot of just plain human temptation to use this kind of power for selfish purposes. Based on that, it's not that surprising that Chance used a loophole to keep access to it, but I didn't see that coming in advance. B.J.'s fate is also not completely comfortable to consider—I think it's hard to argue that the way he and Chance got together wasn't morally messed up, even considering that he's perfectly happy with it now and wouldn't want it any other way. While Chance isn't going wild with power the way Donnie was, should he really have that power even so? Will the setup he has with B.J. be enough to keep him from abusing it? Although I'm reading this for the gay porn, I think it's neat that these kind of topics are kind of left open by the ending (in my interpretation of it at least!). Speaking of gay porn, I was really into the last scene! Nice to see more of B.J. as a subby muscular bottom. I enjoyed all of the changing circumstances he was put in in this story.