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Anonymous
6/28/22, 4:51 AM
Steven Thinks!
6/28/22, 4:35 AM
This is hands down one of the hottest chapters you ever wrote. Hoping see more of Bucks Dad.
6/28/22, 4:16 AM
Very very hot and sexy. Loved it! So hot!
6/28/22, 3:54 AM
So great to see you back. Loved this.
6/28/22, 2:03 AM
Very interesting and sexy. Jese is such a slut. I wonder if the two friends hang out again, I hope they do. I also hope he can still go to school. But yeah sexy story.
6/27/22, 11:37 PM
Nice start. I liked the gradual transformation and I did actually like the butt on the seat. Kinda wish he had kept that, haha. I'm also really glad he kept his face. I love transformations that keep the face or at least mouth intact. Personally not a fan of painful transformations and the unwillingness, but that's personal preference I suppose. On a structural note I found the story hard to read at times due to the large blocks of text and the lack of quotation marks in most cases. It was difficult to tell who was talking at times. You can ask on the discord for someone to proofread, there's usually someone to help you out. There's even a proofreader role, so you can quickly find someone who is up for doing that. I would really suggest you do that. A minor complaint is that there were a ton of technical words regarding motor cycles that I didn't know, but depending on who this story is for that may be a me problem, haha.

6/28/22, 1:44 AM
@Cockatrice Thank you very much.
Anonymous
6/28/22, 1:38 AM
Good story! Parts of it made me laugh out loud, especially in chapters 1 and 2
6/28/22, 12:39 AM
That's one intense edging scene!
6/28/22, 12:32 AM
The edging procedure ... 'nuff said! Very hot.
6/28/22, 12:16 AM
So I don't know if your planning this sort of thing or not but the idea of say one of the members is gay or forced into or whatever could be nice. Won't save him from becoming transformed but it might make things nicer. Like honestly I could imagine the bartender being kept away from things so he doesn't come under suspicion. I've read this chapter like three times now. So sexy.

6/28/22, 12:32 AM
@Heru Kane I'm so glad you enjoyed! Part 2 just needs some tweaks, and I think you'll be quite happy with the content!