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6/28/22, 6:29 PM
I knew it! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! Perfect. Slice of Life saga now please
6/28/22, 6:26 PM
As always, Jese is my favorite hypnotized boy, and your story does a masterful job at letting us into his mind, experiencing his confusion and how his mind slowly bends to everything his master is programming him to do, feel and think. I can never read your stories in one go, cause once you get going, I need a break every few paragraphs. No one does the hypno mind-state like you. This one was probably one of the funnest as well. For a moment, I thought Herald was getting both Jessy and Randy, the whole inclusion of the bear was super hot. As always, can't wait for the next adventure with Jese. Kudos!
6/28/22, 4:34 PM
Aaah, Jese. My favourite protagonist. Such a slut at heart, but he doesn't know it. Just needs a guiding hand.
Inu
6/28/22, 6:43 AM
This is a major kink of mine, literally this. I love motorbike tf and I'm so happy to see it here. I'd love to see more from you.

6/28/22, 4:26 PM
Thanks glad you enjoyed it working on part 2 and 3 @Inu
Fred W Kong
6/28/22, 11:14 AM
I like the idea of Rusty getting changed more. Seems fair and balanced, as all things should be. This story is really really hot. From the setting through the concept and execution, it's unlike anything I've read, though it responds in a strange way to some Horny Teenage Fantasies I had while learning to play TTRPGs. Absolutely incredible work, I'm glad you were able to get it to us through the writer's block! It is truly, awesomely hot.

6/28/22, 4:26 PM
@Fred W Kong Thanks! I've been meaning to write an RPG inspired story for a while now.
Evan
6/27/22, 11:43 PM
I'm voting for suggesting Rusty making changes to his own sheet to solve the lube issue. Enjoyed this. I feel bad for our hero but I'm hoping Dusty gets to really make the most of the character sheet authority and "do whatever makes the video hotter" instruction to maybe help out a bit.

6/28/22, 4:23 PM
@Evan Glad you enjoyed it! I definitely have some ideas for how Dusty might use the loopholes Rusty is giving him :wink:
Marky
6/28/22, 4:21 PM
Definitly máx is died.. Dont write, dont answer... Never dont know about Marky...
6/28/22, 4:19 PM
Glad I stopped in to read this story. I love manipulations with clothes.
6/28/22, 4:16 PM
This was super sexy. Maybe with enough good boys he can regain a body. Also I imagine the the friend goes and becomes a good boy too.
Jun 4, 2006
Anonymous
6/28/22, 3:50 PM
Superb story. Excellent conclusion with just the right build-up and denouement. Well done.