Recent Comments

6/26/22, 7:45 AM
A new and exciting use for a skateboard. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter later!
6/26/22, 5:28 AM
A really well written piece of work. I often come back to read a story like this a few times to really get a sense of it, the characters, the scene. The changes were so well done, slowly being corrupted, then changed seemed all to fitting. Really well done.
Evan
6/26/22, 4:40 AM
Congratulations on reviving this series and giving it a full start to finish treatment. It was glorious. I've commented along the way but I have to thank you for a sweet and sexy tale all the way through. Sensual and caring. Chris is so much happier now. And we trust the daddies took care of everything back home. Marcus clearly wasn't around for that. How cool that Chris wrote the script. Marcus should try out. I wonder if there is a making of behind the scenes coming... ;) Thank you for your writing. I can't wait to see what you do next.
Anon
6/26/22, 12:32 AM
It'd be hot to see an alternate ending where he does decide to become another one of Donnies pups
6/25/22, 11:26 PM
It was amazing. Thank you for writing this story and for getting it to the end. I can’t wait for more from you.
6/25/22, 11:12 PM
It's both so wonderful and so sinister at the same time that two guys find exactly what they want and find a boy who needs what they're offering and guide him to wanting it too. All of them are happy in the end, and that's the sweetest, best part of the story. You couldn't have written a more perfect story if you had read my mind, down to the name of the dog. Brilliant story! You've outdone yourself. Also, I wanna watch "The Boy Next Door"!
6/25/22, 10:35 PM
You... Twan, ya cant just make an amazing story like this. It ain't fair. Here I am, trying to be good, and then you write a story and now I'm horny AF. Like, how am I supposed to live laugh love in these conditions? In all seriousness, this was a great story. I want wait to see what stories may come in the future. I'm sure they'll be very... Entertaining 👀
Old man kisser
6/25/22, 10:00 PM
I wish i had a daddy who would pecnotize me to be more successful at work.
6/25/22, 9:56 PM
Absolutely loved this.
6/25/22, 12:00 PM
very sexy story! just a suggestion but, could he potentially use his brainwashing power to convince his son to worship his gas?

Anonymous
6/25/22, 8:35 PM
Just curious, oddballs, but will you be continuing your "Eyes of the Djinn" series at some point as I've really been enjoying that.

Oddballs
6/25/22, 8:38 PM
@ Honestly I am trying, but I’m having trouble with the direction I’m trying to take with it. I’m stuck. I’m hoping that working on different stories will somehow give me some sort of solution as to how I can get rid of this creative rut I’m in…