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spiralthiago
6/25/22, 6:18 PM
you are my idol when writing... just like hypnotrill and absman420 . You have left me squeezed from so much use of the hand... I dedicated a lot to your stories... excellent writer I am your new fans keep it up... THE TRUTH SHOULD BE MORE SEQUELS OF THIS NEW SERIES THIS WELL PLANNED AND VERY EXCITING TRANSFORMATIONS 🔥🔥😘👏❤️
6/25/22, 6:16 PM
That's all. The story seems unfinished.
6/25/22, 5:41 PM
I am totally amazed at what I just read. Who knew you had this in you. This is one of your best twists yet. It was great to get a look into Grayson and Archie, and those Eden drugs. You’ve always been right, it’s those born again Christians that we have to be watching out for. Thanks for all that you do.
Ken
6/25/22, 5:40 PM
This is definitely my favorite version of mafia. Makes me wish I had played it with my friends...maybe we still might :smirk:
Ken
6/25/22, 5:30 PM
The story had me hard from beginning to end! This was a great original story and I wish it was an entire drawn out series; let's impregnate the world!
Anonymous
6/25/22, 5:04 PM
Phenomenal
6/25/22, 3:53 PM
Excellent descriptive writing. Great detail without bogging the story down.
Anonymous
6/25/22, 3:46 PM
Holy shit. That's one of the best stories I've ever read on here
6/25/22, 3:18 PM
Great story. Interesting and creative plot. This chapter on its own is complete but it could be the start of a much longer story. Well done.
6/25/22, 3:07 PM
Just wanna point out, the story is in second person, not first as it is tagged