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easdf
6/25/22, 12:21 PM
I'm so glad I kept on reading! When I started reading this chapter I was so ready to hate cy, but as I kept reading my heart started to melt. I loved that the emotions (at least after a while) were genuine and that ultimately Jack was happy with the result. Cy's decision to keep Jack under when changes started to become irreversible is irresponsible at best, but he had his redemption arc and Jack is truly happy. The ending was wholesome and perfect. 10/10!
6/25/22, 3:50 AM
Was this story hidden for a while? I remember going to search for it and never being able to find it. Hits so much buttons. So happy to have read it again. Can't wait to read where it goes. Thank you!

6/25/22, 11:44 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk I published it a few years ago and didn't complete it, after my hiatus I decided to republish it and finish it, final chapter (unreleased so far) is coming out later tonight.
6/25/22, 11:23 AM
masterpiece!
6/25/22, 6:06 AM
Hey, really glad you decided to update. Chapter 2 is a favorite of mine!

6/25/22, 6:12 AM
@Oneironautics thanks. This is going to be (if things go as planned) a very slow burn hypno/brainwashing take. But also trying to create a very real environment and convey that sometimes fantasy is different from reality. I hope you enjoy the long process Duke has before him. Im already working on chapter 4. This story I hope will be relatable and touch many kink aspects.
6/25/22, 5:41 AM
Rusty changing himself for sure, everyone wants his downfall
6/25/22, 5:16 AM
I seriously cannot express how much I love plot chapters in my normally hardcore erotica. I’m extremely invested, excellent stuff.
Anonymous
6/25/22, 5:16 AM
OK I've lost my interest. It looks like the vote was for "try to fight it" and Carter **still** wound up a cock obsessed bottom jock bro. The majority of the comments seem to despise Rusty for being such a jerk and want him to get a comeuppance. There was the hint that Dusty is planning something, but it seems like Rusty is still going to win and the votes don't matter.
6/25/22, 5:08 AM
I really like this story, and the slow but steady progression of changes and events. I found it super hot that he kept his mind as it was before the physical changes.
Anonymous
6/25/22, 4:12 AM
Definitely to make more changes to Carter's ass attributes!
6/25/22, 3:34 AM
Suggest Rusty make some changes to Rusty’s own character sheet to solve the lube problem