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7/26/22, 8:23 PM
Maybe add a demonically possessed jockstrap to the mix? ;-)
7/26/22, 8:17 PM
This story is everything erotic masturbation material should be! A fun & sexy guilty pleasure born out of a fantastical premise delivered with care to everyone's mental spankbanks! I think this chapter has officially put a jockstrap mind control fetish on the figurative shelf next to my general clothing controller fetish.
7/26/22, 8:08 PM
I really love the way Sam tries to continue with his life as usual. The way a seemingly inanimate object exerts almost a sleazy plump butt groping control over not only his life, but the people around him is super fucking hot! :peach: :peach: :fire: :fire: Please more chapters!
Jaberjaw373
7/26/22, 7:18 PM
This is probably dead but please continue this story. It's so fucking hot and I keep coming back to it
7/26/22, 2:14 PM
Ooh that was worth the wait! Love that Russell is having the time of his life 🥵

7/26/22, 7:04 PM
@Jdog think you mean Marcus in this story lol
7/25/22, 3:50 PM
I was enthralled by this story, almost hypnotized and wanting to read more. Cant waith to follow Daveys journey

7/26/22, 6:49 AM
@OKCcadMan Thank you for your kind words. Chapter two is now completed but I need to do my proof reading and plan to submit it tonight after work - so watch this space

7/26/22, 6:33 PM
@Whitechap_e16 I cant wait!
7/26/22, 6:07 PM
Just as a opinion isn't better make a new seaseon apart of the seaseon 1? Just for don't mix the stories
Anonymous
7/26/22, 5:55 PM
I check back every day for the next chapter :) can't wait to see Carter lose more intelligence, more sexual attributes getting leveled up (carter's ass/"love nut"/ass hunger, going "beyond human limits," all while making Carter beg for it all), more obedience commands, and dusty slowly taking over *drool emoji x 3* truly, such an amazing piece of work from bluesuede (as always)
7/26/22, 5:45 PM
Wooooooowww This is perfect. >///<
7/26/22, 3:02 AM
You do a great thing of building anticipation as all the different gods visit these young guys, while also making the eventual outcome feel natural and inescapable! Thanks for another amazing, lore-rich hot-as-hell chapter!

7/26/22, 4:58 PM
@time.to.occur Yeah, one of my favourite parts of this chapter was writing the gradual realisation, and I felt like the climax at the end was singularly fitting to Talley's final conclusion. And, yeah, this definitely had the densest lore of the bunch! It was great fun putting it all together.