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6/22/22, 12:57 AM
Think we’d all be sad if this story never saw the grand finale it deserves

6/23/22, 5:58 PM
@Hdhshs it’s coming!! Proofreading now, next chapter will be submitted today. Next chapter will be proofread too and submitted this weekend. Then the epilogue next week wrapping it all up.

Anonymous
6/24/22, 3:09 AM
Martin: oh no! The site is being DOSed! Community: Nah, we're just repeatedly refreshing Edlam's author page :)

6/24/22, 3:11 AM
Hahahaha. Def give them some time, just edited in one paragraph at the end to provide a bit more of a connection to the epilogue 😜 so they’ll have to spend some time considering this is the longest chapter of the series.

6/24/22, 6:54 AM
That Anonymous comment literally saying what I had been doing all last week and this week :sweat_smile:
6/24/22, 6:34 AM
Awesome story!
Old man kisser
6/23/22, 10:36 PM
"Reed said, handing Ian a piece of paper, using that opportunity to get closer to him." Typo? or was tophers first draft name Ian?

6/24/22, 6:18 AM
@Old man kisser it was indeed, thank you for noticing, I fixed it!
Evan
6/24/22, 4:38 AM
Another magnificent chapter. The opening in particular was astonishing. The description of restraint and barriers crumbling was perfect. And now their dad too. Sammy is such a good influence.
Evan
6/24/22, 4:33 AM
Such a sweet story. I loved the happy ending.
Evan
6/24/22, 3:39 AM
So Viraj's mind constantly going back to Wyatt was art imitating life? I spent a lot of their time in the bleachers searching for a sign Wyatt was getting his own tattoo. And if the way they were interacting would inform it. Say, attached to his cock and leasing him to desire fucking and those seeing it craving to feel it in them. Inverse to Viraj's wanting to be fucked and having the glimpses want to poke him. Whether you continue course, do something new or weave some combination, I know it will be great and can't wait to read it.

6/24/22, 3:58 AM
@Evan the bearer of the tattoo will get like 3/10 obsessed with the person who saw it - a mild compulsion to do the deed with him. The person who saw it ramps up to 10/10 obsessed pretty quick. Things don’t always work the same though, as I alluded to with Kendrick. Also, Viraj is a bottom quite apart from the tattoo. That it landed in his ass was a happy coincidence for him :smile:
6/24/22, 3:38 AM
A brilliant end to a perfectly told and hot series. In the end, like all young men, unchecked hornyness will lead them to make poor decisions, and in this case, it proves to be their undoing as at the height of it, they just give in to it rather than fight it. And as Tyler gave in and was rewired to enjoy pleasure as a bottom, was his attraction to Ben forced or was he discovering what truly made his friend attractive to him? In the end, the Doc wins, and his greatest pleasure is our own, enjoying the manipulation of the young men for his voyeuristic/onanistic pleasure.
Evan
6/24/22, 3:32 AM
What a work of art. It begins with hoping Topher find some of the affection and protection he was leaving in his life so far with Reed and Saint. A teasing, slow build of feeling the boy out. Then the hotness. So sensual, so evocative with senses engaged. When the trap is sprung there comes that tiny tension. Uncertainty of just how caring Reed is after all. Loved the warmth and musk making Topher compliant. Outstanding sexual scenes. Highly charged with hypnosis elements to boot. My buttons were well and truly pressed. And all connected and deep with the focus on their bodies and surrender. Gaining so much more for the choice of their acts not including penetrative sex this time. I would love to see more of this and Reed's power. Is Saint also special in the same or a different way? Did the roommate know something, feeling Topher to be careful, or was it a general concern situation. Loved this. Thank you for an awesome story.
Evan
6/23/22, 4:38 AM
What a joy to not only get a new chapter but an extra long one. I was particularly grateful not to end on evil interlude. Pete is adorable. How lucky for Sam to have received a himbo instruction manual, and other guides by such well respected experts in their fields. The elation and love you convey between Sam and his boys is palpable and warms my heart every time. I love how they are all finding their places and being free to be themselves and love together as a family. Nothing bad is allowed to happen. The surreal fairy tale nature is fun as well. Thank you for writing a hot and romantic series. I am dying to know more about the arrangement with the fey and whether Mark it's still about our a prospective daddy partner to keep the rambunctious boys in order. Just who is stocking groceries??? Can't wait for more.

6/24/22, 2:10 AM
@Evan Thank you so much for your amazing comments! I'm so glad that you're enjoying yourself and the fun and joyful tone of this crazy modern fairy tale. Pete is so immensely fun to write, and I'm glad that he comes through as a fun to read character as well. Sam is building his family, and they each have found what they needed to leave terrible situations behind. Chosen family is gonna remain a big theme, and fun surprises will come along the way to the end. Sam is indeed doubly blessed as the kitchen gets stocked, his outfits are set out for him and the beds are made, and even fortuitously necessary books arrived just in time. What's going on indeed? How much magic is at play here? Maybe Sam should do some reading too, but he clearly has been swamped! As for nothing bad happening, the Evil Mother would have words with you about that. Just wait and see if she's done! I'm working on the new chapter and hope to have it ready soon, so until then, thanks, and hope you continue to enjoy the ride!
6/24/22, 1:30 AM
Holy hell, that was an erotic ride. LOVED it.