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6/23/22, 10:52 AM
Great story! Interesting to get one where the hypnotist himself is essentially asexual (or at least only gets off on the hypnosis power trip, rather than fucking the boys himself).
6/22/22, 10:20 PM
Awesome take on ... Thor and his hammer! Loved it!

6/23/22, 10:19 AM
Thanks@FreeThinker
6/23/22, 9:18 AM
I wish Lucus will have a chance to drink pink potion. I wouldlike to know what will happen to him.
6/23/22, 7:36 AM
Amazing stuff. More please please please
6/22/22, 8:52 AM
This is a fun story! The mechanic is a little complicated, so when reading I wondered, don’t the promises need to be worded as the opposite of whatever the promise-breaker wants (since it’s being broken)? The attempts "I promise I took off my clothes before I jumped in the shower" and "I promise my clothes are completely drrrrrrr—" don’t seem to fit that format, although they didn’t work out anyway. Is that just Chance messing it up as he starts out?

6/23/22, 7:32 AM
@drummer I wish I could say this was intentional, but alas, it is very much a continuity error I failed to catch when revising this story. I like the premise, but I did give myself a complicated job of trying to write a plot device that has to be the reverse of what it’s supposed to be. Especially when I, the writer, know it won’t actually happen, it’s tricky to conceptualize it so I didn’t reverse it the proper way. But that’s a me problem, and I appreciate you pointing it out. I won’t be changing it, so for the sake of argument, I’ll say that Chance did actually screw up. Based on the rules I’ve made up, those outcomes still would have happened as they did (maybe not, but let’s not pull that thread). He’s struggling just as much to get a grip on it, so his clumsy first attempts track nicely with his journey. Retconning to the rescue! :)
6/21/22, 6:57 AM
I'm with Anonymous up there - never thought I'd get to a place where a story went to far (especially a well-written one like this) but I lost my erection as soon as we got to taking a human being's actual voice away, leaving him unable to communicate, and then abandoning him. No longer sexy for me. Just cruel, at least so far. For all I know there's some sort of plan here that will change things by story's end - or maybe we'll just leave a complete innocent enslaved, helpless and unable to communicate all while hating every second - I don't know, and unfortunately, I guess I won't find out. You write really really well dude, don't get me wrong. But leaving the tale at this at this point? nah... I've been in the leather scene in NYC since I was 17 and am now 59, I've seen 2 subs/slaves suicide when pushed too far and I'm afraid for me your story is reminding me way too much of those men that the Tops they were involved with felt only mattered for their pleasure and were completely disposable, right down to their very lives. I know this is "just a story" but there's a point where even in fantasy some acknowledgement of the humanity of our partners has to come in... keep up the good writing, I'll try your next story, and I'm sure the vast majority here are just fine with it, but you lost me on this one ending a chapter where it did - in hopelessness. It's just too uncomfortable for me personally now - hopefully everyone else will keep enjoying. Keep up your good writing...

6/23/22, 7:26 AM
@versmetropig I’m sorry to hear how you felt, and I respect that this may have affected you in unexpected ways given your past experience. I know this was a tough chapter to leave off on. For what it’s worth, to anyone who shares this commenter’s concerns, I have published the next entry that establishes a clearer narrative path. Without giving anything away, Chance does not abandon B.J., and we will be returning to Donnie’s apartment before the story concludes.
6/23/22, 7:24 AM
A fun ending to a great series. I enjoyed it immensely!
Sexcrab
6/23/22, 7:21 AM
Best hypno-story with harem elements of recent times. Usually, stories with 4 or more slaves tend to be rushed, too litle descriptive, but not here. Of course, I wanted to see a little more focus on Jake and Ben, but just the spotlight you gave Craig in this chapter proved to be more than a simple story about "How Tyler O'Brein Became a Slave" (which would be nice too, but it's not how it was sold in the description). Please, make more chapters. Best wishes!
6/22/22, 11:16 AM
Interesting start! I hope you continue this as an ongoing series.

6/23/22, 2:18 AM
@Hypnothrill 100% agreed

6/23/22, 4:50 AM
@Hypnothrill Definitely needs to be continued. This is barely a cock-tease, to put a pun on it.
Anonymous
6/23/22, 3:58 AM
i'm genuinely delighted by this series. while the sex is absolutely hot, your writing really shines particularly well in the characters and sense of humor. i'm so excited to see more!