Recent Comments

6/23/22, 1:10 AM
This was an incredibly unique and surprisingly cute story, definitely not what I was expecting when I clicked on it.
6/23/22, 12:44 AM
Perfect and incredibly hot! The Doc is using their sex drives and their friends against each other, which is a trope I simply love. Young men live for their friends and their sex drive, and he is making both their weakness, and how he ties Ty's arousal to his desire to succumb is just incredibly hot and arousing. Can't wait for more!
Jun 21, 2022
6/23/22, 12:24 AM
This was super hot. Love the hypno and the farting and the buttplay.
6/22/22, 6:37 PM
Everything about this is perfect!!! Thank you so much!

6/23/22, 12:21 AM
@Jojojojojojo and thank you!
Evan
6/22/22, 11:42 PM
Quite a unique take and a fun one. Our protagonist definitely seems like the perfect support boy for the group. Quite a way to introduce themselves. Can't argue with the results. I think he's in for a very thorough spring break week.
Evan
6/22/22, 11:39 PM
I needed to edit this comment because I neglected to say that I have been eagerly anticipating the continuation of this story for quite a while, after having ravenously consumed all the previous chapters in rapid succession. Thus, I was delighted to learn it was posted. Thank you both for another great chapter. Now to the original comments: Such a web being woven. Distracting Marin was beautifully done, such a sensual and touching piece of writing. It is so very clear Calix cares for them. I do so enjoy how the two of you focus more on sense and feeling than the pure mechanics of sexual scenes. It makes each a delight. You both continue to unspool the threads while keeping a masterful hold of the tensions. Between factions like the crew and Anthix. Between Anthix and Rhys and just what will happen when the crew gets to talk with Jasper. How whatever happens reflects on the budding reconciliation between Anthix and Rhys. Who will find out what about what's been going on with Jasper and how that will appear without the full story? Rhys's caring for Jasper and his uncertainty as to whether he's being played is heartbreaking. As much as I want them to be well together, there is also the clear, honest connection with his old crew and Seth that - at the moment - looks mutually exclusive. The two of you create a twisted, thorny set of circumstances to navigate. The progression feels very natural and very clever ways of bringing information to the various parties and a nice continuation and fallout from Jasper and Rhys's expedition to the slums. The VR scene and its testing ground was nicely played. It felt very on theme and said a lot about the characters on both sides. I think it worked well to bridge a divide there more quickly than might have been done otherwise. Plus VR is fun. But damn you both, why can't Rhys and Jasper just be happy? :D
Blue moon under hell
6/22/22, 11:21 PM
This has to be one of the more unique takes on orgasm denial here, don't take away the ability to orgasm just make them not want it in exchange for something better (side effects include making you more enslaved of course)
6/22/22, 10:33 PM
This is absolutely terrific -- the setting, the set-up, the characters, the word-play. It takes a lot of effort to bring a story together like this, and it totally pays off here!
6/22/22, 9:35 PM
I really hope Mr G. gets what's coming to him! Drone 3.0
Anonymous
6/21/22, 9:59 PM
I’m a sucker for a slack-jawed stare!

6/22/22, 8:42 PM
@ You and me both. A guy with half-open eyes and a jaw hanging open…GOD, that visual alone kills me.