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6/21/22, 6:57 AM
I'm with Anonymous up there - never thought I'd get to a place where a story went to far (especially a well-written one like this) but I lost my erection as soon as we got to taking a human being's actual voice away, leaving him unable to communicate, and then abandoning him. No longer sexy for me. Just cruel, at least so far. For all I know there's some sort of plan here that will change things by story's end - or maybe we'll just leave a complete innocent enslaved, helpless and unable to communicate all while hating every second - I don't know, and unfortunately, I guess I won't find out. You write really really well dude, don't get me wrong. But leaving the tale at this at this point? nah... I've been in the leather scene in NYC since I was 17 and am now 59, I've seen 2 subs/slaves suicide when pushed too far and I'm afraid for me your story is reminding me way too much of those men that the Tops they were involved with felt only mattered for their pleasure and were completely disposable, right down to their very lives. I know this is "just a story" but there's a point where even in fantasy some acknowledgement of the humanity of our partners has to come in... keep up the good writing, I'll try your next story, and I'm sure the vast majority here are just fine with it, but you lost me on this one ending a chapter where it did - in hopelessness. It's just too uncomfortable for me personally now - hopefully everyone else will keep enjoying. Keep up your good writing...

6/23/22, 7:26 AM
@versmetropig I’m sorry to hear how you felt, and I respect that this may have affected you in unexpected ways given your past experience. I know this was a tough chapter to leave off on. For what it’s worth, to anyone who shares this commenter’s concerns, I have published the next entry that establishes a clearer narrative path. Without giving anything away, Chance does not abandon B.J., and we will be returning to Donnie’s apartment before the story concludes.
6/23/22, 7:24 AM
A fun ending to a great series. I enjoyed it immensely!
Sexcrab
6/23/22, 7:21 AM
Best hypno-story with harem elements of recent times. Usually, stories with 4 or more slaves tend to be rushed, too litle descriptive, but not here. Of course, I wanted to see a little more focus on Jake and Ben, but just the spotlight you gave Craig in this chapter proved to be more than a simple story about "How Tyler O'Brein Became a Slave" (which would be nice too, but it's not how it was sold in the description). Please, make more chapters. Best wishes!
6/22/22, 11:16 AM
Interesting start! I hope you continue this as an ongoing series.

6/23/22, 2:18 AM
@Hypnothrill 100% agreed

6/23/22, 4:50 AM
@Hypnothrill Definitely needs to be continued. This is barely a cock-tease, to put a pun on it.
Anonymous
6/23/22, 3:58 AM
i'm genuinely delighted by this series. while the sex is absolutely hot, your writing really shines particularly well in the characters and sense of humor. i'm so excited to see more!
Kent
6/23/22, 2:43 AM
This series is my current favorite
Evan
6/22/22, 11:58 PM
This site is a great place to be able to give feedback on this sort of a story and so I shall eagerly do so. I loved this. Just as Time says, it hints at a broader universe but also allows the reader to focus on the here and now of the tattoo. All the while, curious about how the tattoo works. How it clearly jumped to Viraj. Wyatt is adorable and this story has a wonderful tenderness to it while still exploring a fun supernatural and sexy slutty nature. Spectacularly done. I'm very curious to where where you choose to take it.

6/23/22, 2:37 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback, @Evan! I *thought* I had the rest of the story more or less mapped out in my head, but now there’s a second, much longer version percolating thanks to the fact that Wyatt came into existence and became impossible to ignore while I was writing this instalment. I can still go the original way, but… we’ll see what I have the stomach for :sweat_smile:
6/23/22, 12:07 AM
This was sooo hot! More more of this! Would love to know where his parts went, what got sold and turned into what. Make it a series. I'd love to do this to some guys!!

6/23/22, 1:15 AM
@Hungryone4u thank you. I’m planning on tracking all the parts and pieces, but first we’re going to see how Martin got itself to being Maximized.
6/23/22, 1:10 AM
This was an incredibly unique and surprisingly cute story, definitely not what I was expecting when I clicked on it.
6/23/22, 12:44 AM
Perfect and incredibly hot! The Doc is using their sex drives and their friends against each other, which is a trope I simply love. Young men live for their friends and their sex drive, and he is making both their weakness, and how he ties Ty's arousal to his desire to succumb is just incredibly hot and arousing. Can't wait for more!