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Kent
6/23/22, 2:43 AM
This series is my current favorite
Evan
6/22/22, 11:58 PM
This site is a great place to be able to give feedback on this sort of a story and so I shall eagerly do so. I loved this. Just as Time says, it hints at a broader universe but also allows the reader to focus on the here and now of the tattoo. All the while, curious about how the tattoo works. How it clearly jumped to Viraj. Wyatt is adorable and this story has a wonderful tenderness to it while still exploring a fun supernatural and sexy slutty nature. Spectacularly done. I'm very curious to where where you choose to take it.

6/23/22, 2:37 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback, @Evan! I *thought* I had the rest of the story more or less mapped out in my head, but now there’s a second, much longer version percolating thanks to the fact that Wyatt came into existence and became impossible to ignore while I was writing this instalment. I can still go the original way, but… we’ll see what I have the stomach for :sweat_smile:
6/23/22, 12:07 AM
This was sooo hot! More more of this! Would love to know where his parts went, what got sold and turned into what. Make it a series. I'd love to do this to some guys!!

6/23/22, 1:15 AM
@Hungryone4u thank you. I’m planning on tracking all the parts and pieces, but first we’re going to see how Martin got itself to being Maximized.
6/23/22, 1:10 AM
This was an incredibly unique and surprisingly cute story, definitely not what I was expecting when I clicked on it.
6/23/22, 12:44 AM
Perfect and incredibly hot! The Doc is using their sex drives and their friends against each other, which is a trope I simply love. Young men live for their friends and their sex drive, and he is making both their weakness, and how he ties Ty's arousal to his desire to succumb is just incredibly hot and arousing. Can't wait for more!
Jun 21, 2022
6/23/22, 12:24 AM
This was super hot. Love the hypno and the farting and the buttplay.
6/22/22, 6:37 PM
Everything about this is perfect!!! Thank you so much!

6/23/22, 12:21 AM
@Jojojojojojo and thank you!
Evan
6/22/22, 11:42 PM
Quite a unique take and a fun one. Our protagonist definitely seems like the perfect support boy for the group. Quite a way to introduce themselves. Can't argue with the results. I think he's in for a very thorough spring break week.
Evan
6/22/22, 11:39 PM
I needed to edit this comment because I neglected to say that I have been eagerly anticipating the continuation of this story for quite a while, after having ravenously consumed all the previous chapters in rapid succession. Thus, I was delighted to learn it was posted. Thank you both for another great chapter. Now to the original comments: Such a web being woven. Distracting Marin was beautifully done, such a sensual and touching piece of writing. It is so very clear Calix cares for them. I do so enjoy how the two of you focus more on sense and feeling than the pure mechanics of sexual scenes. It makes each a delight. You both continue to unspool the threads while keeping a masterful hold of the tensions. Between factions like the crew and Anthix. Between Anthix and Rhys and just what will happen when the crew gets to talk with Jasper. How whatever happens reflects on the budding reconciliation between Anthix and Rhys. Who will find out what about what's been going on with Jasper and how that will appear without the full story? Rhys's caring for Jasper and his uncertainty as to whether he's being played is heartbreaking. As much as I want them to be well together, there is also the clear, honest connection with his old crew and Seth that - at the moment - looks mutually exclusive. The two of you create a twisted, thorny set of circumstances to navigate. The progression feels very natural and very clever ways of bringing information to the various parties and a nice continuation and fallout from Jasper and Rhys's expedition to the slums. The VR scene and its testing ground was nicely played. It felt very on theme and said a lot about the characters on both sides. I think it worked well to bridge a divide there more quickly than might have been done otherwise. Plus VR is fun. But damn you both, why can't Rhys and Jasper just be happy? :D
Blue moon under hell
6/22/22, 11:21 PM
This has to be one of the more unique takes on orgasm denial here, don't take away the ability to orgasm just make them not want it in exchange for something better (side effects include making you more enslaved of course)