Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/21/22, 9:59 PM
I’m a sucker for a slack-jawed stare!

6/22/22, 8:42 PM
@ You and me both. A guy with half-open eyes and a jaw hanging open…GOD, that visual alone kills me.
6/22/22, 8:41 PM
Brrrr…so chilling! I love the hints you drop about the hypnotic videos and jingles that are slowly influencing the minds of everyone who watches. It’s a commentary on how videos and screens are EVERYWHERE these days…
6/22/22, 7:44 PM
Totally love it! sniffing sweaty uniform must have made me go straight into heaven.
6/22/22, 5:50 PM
This is so damn hot! Even better than the first chapter! I love how you have Dr. Xee's plan not working at first, and I love how Tyler is putting up some real resistance. Too often, writers make their hypnotist characters a little too all-powerful, and it drains the story of any dramatic tension. But here, it's genuinely exciting to see what will happen next, because you keep us guessing.
6/22/22, 4:55 PM
All I can say is DAMN! I really really like where this is going. I can’t wait to see what Tyler and his friends end up becoming!
6/22/22, 3:41 PM
Jake is going to claim his own little toy in Cass…
6/22/22, 2:39 PM
Nice. I like the story so far.
Your closeted gay
6/22/22, 1:50 PM
I love that even though he is a demon, there's a romantic angle to it, and I hope this story explores it more
6/22/22, 6:39 AM
Edlam, we really need the final. Hope you can release when you are ready:grinning:
Jun 21, 2022
6/22/22, 6:38 AM
Oh that was RAUNCHY! I liked that👏👏👏