Recent Comments

6/22/22, 5:50 PM
This is so damn hot! Even better than the first chapter! I love how you have Dr. Xee's plan not working at first, and I love how Tyler is putting up some real resistance. Too often, writers make their hypnotist characters a little too all-powerful, and it drains the story of any dramatic tension. But here, it's genuinely exciting to see what will happen next, because you keep us guessing.
6/22/22, 4:55 PM
All I can say is DAMN! I really really like where this is going. I can’t wait to see what Tyler and his friends end up becoming!
6/22/22, 3:41 PM
Jake is going to claim his own little toy in Cass…
6/22/22, 2:39 PM
Nice. I like the story so far.
Your closeted gay
6/22/22, 1:50 PM
I love that even though he is a demon, there's a romantic angle to it, and I hope this story explores it more
6/22/22, 6:39 AM
Edlam, we really need the final. Hope you can release when you are ready:grinning:
Jun 21, 2022
6/22/22, 6:38 AM
Oh that was RAUNCHY! I liked that👏👏👏
6/22/22, 5:34 AM
I love this story so much, specially the part where the men are stripped and shaved from head to toe with the liquid, smoth men are so hot
6/22/22, 4:41 AM
This is a great start! Also, I’m wondering, is the doctor the same one from “Out of my Lane.”
Anonymous
6/22/22, 3:24 AM
I've never commented on one of these before but the part > “Oh, master Flax” Misery looks me up and down “Is this to be a social visit?” The murky water gathers in her cheeks. Is she blushing?> I legit laughed out loud. That was gold. Solid writing