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Blue moon under hell
6/22/22, 11:21 PM
This has to be one of the more unique takes on orgasm denial here, don't take away the ability to orgasm just make them not want it in exchange for something better (side effects include making you more enslaved of course)
6/22/22, 10:33 PM
This is absolutely terrific -- the setting, the set-up, the characters, the word-play. It takes a lot of effort to bring a story together like this, and it totally pays off here!
6/22/22, 9:35 PM
I really hope Mr G. gets what's coming to him! Drone 3.0
Anonymous
6/21/22, 9:59 PM
I’m a sucker for a slack-jawed stare!

6/22/22, 8:42 PM
@ You and me both. A guy with half-open eyes and a jaw hanging open…GOD, that visual alone kills me.
6/22/22, 8:41 PM
Brrrr…so chilling! I love the hints you drop about the hypnotic videos and jingles that are slowly influencing the minds of everyone who watches. It’s a commentary on how videos and screens are EVERYWHERE these days…
6/22/22, 7:44 PM
Totally love it! sniffing sweaty uniform must have made me go straight into heaven.
6/22/22, 5:50 PM
This is so damn hot! Even better than the first chapter! I love how you have Dr. Xee's plan not working at first, and I love how Tyler is putting up some real resistance. Too often, writers make their hypnotist characters a little too all-powerful, and it drains the story of any dramatic tension. But here, it's genuinely exciting to see what will happen next, because you keep us guessing.
6/22/22, 4:55 PM
All I can say is DAMN! I really really like where this is going. I can’t wait to see what Tyler and his friends end up becoming!
6/22/22, 3:41 PM
Jake is going to claim his own little toy in Cass…
6/22/22, 2:39 PM
Nice. I like the story so far.