Recent Comments

6/21/22, 12:20 PM
Fantastic start! I especially loved those scenes where the other guys realize there's something off about Jake (and Ben), but can't quite figure out what. I'm excited to see what Dr. X has them doing next!
Jun 21, 2022
6/21/22, 12:19 PM
Great story! Especially the description of the hypnotic lights and sound effects associated with the game--those scenes were just so well-written!
6/19/22, 2:37 PM
Jack, you have outdone yourself. But Sammy must continue his chore of liberating all the men he knows.

6/19/22, 2:38 PM
@mjkuhl thanks bud, Sammy's journey is never over...you will be shocked where he shows up next.

6/19/22, 2:42 PM
@Jack Parker, Jack, nothing Sammy does will ever shock me. He is amazing.

6/21/22, 5:27 AM
@Jack Parker Well speaking as a greedy slut, it cannot come fast enough :P

6/21/22, 12:07 PM
@LestatD I'll second that, LestatD
SlutForHypno
6/2/22, 1:54 AM
Just a quick update. Sorry the finally is taking so long. My computer may or may not have crashed erasing all the work I did. Im gonna do my hypno university chapter then come back to this one if you guys dont mind. I promise ill have the finally up in the next couple of weeks. I know what i need to write (I was almost done). I just need to rewrite it and im too tired for that atm haha. Sorry again and thanks for your understanding

6/21/22, 3:52 AM
@SlutForHypno Take you’re time no need to needlessly stress yourself out over it. You’re story is great right and will be even better when you get a chance to finish the final chapter!
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:26 AM
oh i'm having a fantastic time with this series. it's sexy, but also incredibly fun and lighthearted. mostly the characters so far are just making me smile immensely. thank you so much, and i'm looking forward to more!
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:05 AM
It’s so hot! Looking forward to what happens next
6/19/22, 12:48 AM
I am curious to see what happens. Still feel Marcus is a bad friend.

6/20/22, 11:07 PM
I think Marcus is not necessarily a bad friend but he is certainly taking advantage of the situation. I think, unless there has been something we don't know about technically Stanley wasn't forced into anything. In relation to the other guys Marcus is hypnotizing he is a bad guy in relation to that but towards Stanley it is more morally grey

6/21/22, 1:41 AM
@Hypnofiend23 I can see that. I just sti feel bad for Stanley. I have to assume Marcus at least has some feeling for Stanley.
6/21/22, 12:38 AM
And now the story gets complicated; Cassius was worried about Archimedes but Jake has now become something to worry about, something his magic cannot handle. Another enjoyable chapter; looking forward to the next!!!
6/21/22, 12:28 AM
This is super hot. I really like the idea of the 'father' or 'brother' guy getting out of jail a subby needy good boy for a gay guy. So yeah this is super hot.
Anonymous
6/20/22, 11:16 PM
One of my favorite stories ever