Recent Comments

6/21/22, 3:52 PM
So good
6/21/22, 3:52 PM
Excited for more!
6/21/22, 3:47 PM
Poor Clark. He needs a friend to gift him a speedo. Then he'll be free.
6/21/22, 3:23 PM
things are heating up, lets see how things go from now own
Kip
6/21/22, 2:43 PM
This is so much fun. Love the gradual world changing! Reminds me of all those Chads… 🥰
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:27 PM
Loved this! You write extremely well and I’m excited to read the next part.
6/21/22, 1:10 PM
Great story and great new chapter.
6/21/22, 12:20 PM
Fantastic start! I especially loved those scenes where the other guys realize there's something off about Jake (and Ben), but can't quite figure out what. I'm excited to see what Dr. X has them doing next!
Jun 21, 2022
6/21/22, 12:19 PM
Great story! Especially the description of the hypnotic lights and sound effects associated with the game--those scenes were just so well-written!