Recent Comments

6/21/22, 3:47 PM
Poor Clark. He needs a friend to gift him a speedo. Then he'll be free.
6/21/22, 3:23 PM
things are heating up, lets see how things go from now own
Kip
6/21/22, 2:43 PM
This is so much fun. Love the gradual world changing! Reminds me of all those Chads… 🥰
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:27 PM
Loved this! You write extremely well and I’m excited to read the next part.
6/21/22, 1:10 PM
Great story and great new chapter.
6/21/22, 12:20 PM
Fantastic start! I especially loved those scenes where the other guys realize there's something off about Jake (and Ben), but can't quite figure out what. I'm excited to see what Dr. X has them doing next!
Jun 21, 2022
6/21/22, 12:19 PM
Great story! Especially the description of the hypnotic lights and sound effects associated with the game--those scenes were just so well-written!
6/19/22, 2:37 PM
Jack, you have outdone yourself. But Sammy must continue his chore of liberating all the men he knows.

6/19/22, 2:38 PM
@mjkuhl thanks bud, Sammy's journey is never over...you will be shocked where he shows up next.

6/19/22, 2:42 PM
@Jack Parker, Jack, nothing Sammy does will ever shock me. He is amazing.

6/21/22, 5:27 AM
@Jack Parker Well speaking as a greedy slut, it cannot come fast enough :P

6/21/22, 12:07 PM
@LestatD I'll second that, LestatD
SlutForHypno
6/2/22, 1:54 AM
Just a quick update. Sorry the finally is taking so long. My computer may or may not have crashed erasing all the work I did. Im gonna do my hypno university chapter then come back to this one if you guys dont mind. I promise ill have the finally up in the next couple of weeks. I know what i need to write (I was almost done). I just need to rewrite it and im too tired for that atm haha. Sorry again and thanks for your understanding

6/21/22, 3:52 AM
@SlutForHypno Take you’re time no need to needlessly stress yourself out over it. You’re story is great right and will be even better when you get a chance to finish the final chapter!