Recent Comments

6/20/22, 2:14 AM
Loved this story, insanely hot! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
DWK
6/20/22, 1:34 AM
Wow, wonderful. You keep out doing yourself.
6/20/22, 1:14 AM
excited to see where this series goes!
6/20/22, 12:11 AM
I'm loving Archimedes running things and making Cassius angry at almost every turn. An enjoyable read; please keep going!!!
Zeke
6/20/22, 12:01 AM
Awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter
6/19/22, 11:55 PM
Wow, just realized we aren't far from having #dumbjock as a story tag, more power to you and those who gets off on the tag. Personally I am more into turning nerds into dumbjocks like my name cursing them is my thing my story is no where near ready though.
Jun 12, 2022
6/19/22, 10:48 PM
Great story! Love that it was all taken with good humour - and that he used the hypnosis to actually give his friend a good time.
Kip
6/19/22, 10:35 PM
God. That was agonizing watching him give away B.J. like that, but also undeniably hot. Well done. Great chapter. Have to hold out some hope for the heroes, though allowing Donnie to win the day in that way was inspired. This one hurt a bit. Can’t wait for more!
Anonymous
6/19/22, 9:32 PM
I genuinely thought as I was reading that Chance would break through the fog long enough to protect BJ cause i really didn't like seeing that happen to him. On top of that Chance haze no way of getting him back cause all of Donnie's things are promise proof. I don't see a way out of this for BJ and I don't want to continue reading knowing that.

Nutiper
6/19/22, 10:17 PM
@Anonymous, I mean, I will say that the author's note at the end of the chapter + the introduction of what seems to be a Promise _Keepers_ Society (aka, the Asian man in the expensive suit at the end of the chapter) implied to me that there is potentially a way out for BJ. I can't speak for the author and don't know what he has planned, but for now I am assuming (along with MonsterMash62, I think!) that Donnie taking control of BJ was a way to raise the stakes, before eventually resolving things — _not_ a way to permanently describe BJ's new fate. Aka, I don't this chapter is the last word on Donnie or BJ...
6/19/22, 9:15 PM
I loved it