Recent Comments

6/19/22, 7:06 PM
It's a good start, let's see where it goes. Maybe Tyler will learn to be a good boy.
6/19/22, 6:59 PM
Loving how Jacob is gone all the way into slavehood and how delightful Archie is. Cass is in for a ride and I can't wait.
6/19/22, 2:27 PM
Great new chapter. I love how clever Donnie was. I love how clever Chance thought he was. I love what happened to BJ. I loved the sex. And I loved the ending, which looks like it will move the plot forward. I really would’ve loved to see a bit of Donnie fucking with BJ before he kicked out Chance. Chance was so mind fucked by Donnie that forcing him to watch as he tit fucked BJ would’ve been very hot. The sex scene, with mind fucked Chance doing anything he could to please Donnie, was incredibly hot. Can’t wait to read more.

6/19/22, 6:53 PM
@MonsterMash62 this is still sitting with me. Also wanted to comment that I love when a bad guy wins, and you made Donnie into a bad (enough) guy very quickly. I’m guessing it’ll be fixed by the time the story is over and BJ will be back with Chance, but it was very satisfying to see Donnie get him for now at least.
Anonymous
6/19/22, 6:44 PM
This series is amazing
6/19/22, 6:23 PM
Ooh boy do I love your show burners, too bad we have to wait. Really excited to see how this will end!
Jun 13, 2022
6/19/22, 5:40 PM
Wonderfully well-written and powerfully erotic!
6/19/22, 5:26 PM
So hot, dude! Love the mind control to finally make his son behave.
6/19/22, 5:20 PM
Reviewing the latest version, I think this has potential, and I can't wait to see more. Good job man.
6/19/22, 4:00 PM
Love this story so much! Always loved speedos, can’t wait to see the whole of New York wearing them… Something to be said for a properly slow burn like this, the changes (and Speedo-clad men) leaking into Reed’s life slowly, creates a nice sense of dread and unleash. It’s also hot.
6/19/22, 2:08 PM
Wow, I really loved this! Can’t wait to read more!