Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/19/22, 9:32 PM
I genuinely thought as I was reading that Chance would break through the fog long enough to protect BJ cause i really didn't like seeing that happen to him. On top of that Chance haze no way of getting him back cause all of Donnie's things are promise proof. I don't see a way out of this for BJ and I don't want to continue reading knowing that.

Nutiper
6/19/22, 10:17 PM
@Anonymous, I mean, I will say that the author's note at the end of the chapter + the introduction of what seems to be a Promise _Keepers_ Society (aka, the Asian man in the expensive suit at the end of the chapter) implied to me that there is potentially a way out for BJ. I can't speak for the author and don't know what he has planned, but for now I am assuming (along with MonsterMash62, I think!) that Donnie taking control of BJ was a way to raise the stakes, before eventually resolving things — _not_ a way to permanently describe BJ's new fate. Aka, I don't this chapter is the last word on Donnie or BJ...
6/19/22, 9:15 PM
I loved it
6/19/22, 8:32 PM
Outstanding!
Anonymous
6/19/22, 7:27 PM
This story is bonkers and i am here for it. LOVE Archy :D
6/19/22, 7:06 PM
This story is off to a very hot start!
6/19/22, 7:06 PM
It's a good start, let's see where it goes. Maybe Tyler will learn to be a good boy.
6/19/22, 6:59 PM
Loving how Jacob is gone all the way into slavehood and how delightful Archie is. Cass is in for a ride and I can't wait.
6/19/22, 2:27 PM
Great new chapter. I love how clever Donnie was. I love how clever Chance thought he was. I love what happened to BJ. I loved the sex. And I loved the ending, which looks like it will move the plot forward. I really would’ve loved to see a bit of Donnie fucking with BJ before he kicked out Chance. Chance was so mind fucked by Donnie that forcing him to watch as he tit fucked BJ would’ve been very hot. The sex scene, with mind fucked Chance doing anything he could to please Donnie, was incredibly hot. Can’t wait to read more.

6/19/22, 6:53 PM
@MonsterMash62 this is still sitting with me. Also wanted to comment that I love when a bad guy wins, and you made Donnie into a bad (enough) guy very quickly. I’m guessing it’ll be fixed by the time the story is over and BJ will be back with Chance, but it was very satisfying to see Donnie get him for now at least.
Anonymous
6/19/22, 6:44 PM
This series is amazing
6/19/22, 6:23 PM
Ooh boy do I love your show burners, too bad we have to wait. Really excited to see how this will end!