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6/18/22, 8:36 AM
My vote for a title is. “The demon in me” lol get it. Anyway great story hope you continue.

6/18/22, 5:36 PM
@Mrdick I might actually use this as a chapter title. Thank you!
6/18/22, 5:23 PM
Just amazing! Love how this is a slower burn than some other stories—the Speedos are creeping in at different spots, and even those not wearing them (like the waiter) are getting hypnotized by their appeal. And your depiction of someone having to watch it all is particularly disturbing. Incredible work!
6/18/22, 4:36 PM
I would be thrilled to see a continuation of this universe, even if not these exact characters. I would also like to see what happens from here with these characters.
Anonymous
6/17/22, 2:14 PM
I have to head canon that if Tony had passed out, he wouldve started breathing again automatically. Otherwise it became too dark for me, personally. Marcus is twisted, and I hope he gets whats coming for him.

6/18/22, 4:28 PM
@ Yeah that has to be what would happen
Anonymous
6/18/22, 3:49 PM
Would love to see a sequel this was a lot of fun and cute!
6/18/22, 4:09 AM
Well written and engaging. Most erotica on this site and others is akin to pulp fiction (pulpy friction?) This has more of a literary voice and engages both of the reader's heads.

6/18/22, 3:21 PM
Thanks, @scudder! As this was written for time.to.occur’s _PLOTHOLE: Queer Porn ++With++ Plot_ compilation, I really worked to elevate it above “hey, this is fapping material” level. Glad it connected with you.
6/18/22, 1:02 PM
Things are progressing, looking forewords to the cops you promissed, to see how they changed under the speedo's sawy

6/18/22, 2:19 PM
@darkblade2814 You won't see the cops again until the last day (Friday). I'm working on writing the Tuesday/Wednesday scenes now.

6/18/22, 2:37 PM
@Hypnothrill i see, sorry about my anxiety, I think the next part will be great, if you are taking suggestions, why not show the news casters on their speedos and ties?

6/18/22, 2:47 PM
@darkblade2814 Something like that is already in my outline for Thursday.

6/18/22, 2:59 PM
@Hypnothrill cool, thanks
Anonymous
6/18/22, 2:48 PM
Is that the end? I hope not..

6/18/22, 2:52 PM
@ There is one more chapter commissioned
R P
6/3/22, 3:26 PM
Damn, this is an incredibly hot chapter! Love seeing a bit more of the Doc’s perspective. I hope there’s more :)

6/16/22, 3:36 PM
@R P I'm glad you enjoyed! I've been taking a break from writing, but I'm planning on getting back to this series. I hope to get the next chapter out soon. If you have any suggestions on what should come in the future for our favorite little jock, then please feel free to share ^^

R P
6/18/22, 9:55 AM
@Rubber_Lover I'm glad you’re getting back to it 🥰 I’d love to see Adam carrying through on sending the videos to some other doctors. And maybe send Markus to them as well to consult on his case 😈
JamesB
6/18/22, 9:34 AM
Glad this story got its ending! I was imagining myself in every victim’s shoes all the way through. I think my favorite was when Steve hypnotized the one who tried to hypnotize him.🌀🌀😵‍💫😵‍💫