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6/17/22, 4:58 PM
another great chapter
10/9/21, 3:55 PM
Such a hot story, I hope you decide to continue it eventually. It seems like Jason is being forcibly recruited and that would be fun to see. I'm also curious about the fates of the captured deputies but leaving it unknown would be nicely sinister.

10/11/21, 3:37 PM
@amul Thanks! Really glad you enjoyed it. I will continue but probably not until spring. That's when I think my schedule will return to normal. There will be a special fate for the Deputies! Jason's HR credentials will be exploited for aquiring new stock.

6/17/22, 3:30 PM
I just reread this series and hope that you find time in the future for more chapters. @CFlex
6/17/22, 2:02 PM
This is so hot. I can't wait to see what happens next to Stanley. I wonder if Marcus actually likes him, or if he's just in the market for an obedient slave. Can't wait to see what he does to him next, and what kinks could be involved later in the story. I mean, I still feel bad for Stanley. But eventually he'll be all for it I assume
6/17/22, 12:22 PM
Wonder when will this be updated
6/16/22, 11:57 PM
Oooh!! I enjoyed this one VERY much!

6/17/22, 9:59 AM
Thank you. I’m a big fan of your works as well. It’s always nice to get a comment.@stimle
PromethiumJPM
6/17/22, 9:53 AM
Goddamn! Holly Fu k!
Drone unit 55 b/delta:
6/17/22, 9:20 AM
This story thoroughly deserves a sequel and I will enjoy reading it ! As long as Master let's me of course :
Drone unit 55 b/delta:
6/17/22, 9:16 AM
This story was amazing and thoroughly deserves a sequel which I will enjoy reading ! Only if Master let's me of course :
Jun 8, 2022
Titan
6/17/22, 8:21 AM
Very hot story. Love the way you describe the fattening process on the soon to be obese gentleman daddy.
6/16/22, 4:21 PM
For Tony's "buyer" it would be nice if it was shown he was not a monster. In the first chapter Marcus seems like a semi-decent guy with a fetish and now he's a psychopath.

6/16/22, 4:46 PM
@Frapsity I honestly see that. I cover both Marcus’s kind of ruthless nature and the reasons he acts that way sometimes down the line

6/16/22, 10:08 PM
@PuffDeamon I'm glad it's explained later! It seems like it goes beyond ruthless. He watched Tony involuntarily suffocating himself to near death without any emotions. A lack of empathy is one of the landmark symptoms of a sociopath/psychopath. I missed the line where Marcus feels sorry for Tony but that doesn't come across at all. That line seems like something you throw in so the narrator doesn't get added to a list of deviants the government monitors. This is what I meant by his buyer as not a monster: Scenario 1- where the buyer is a villain worthy of an Isekai anime or a Baron Harkonen analog. Scenario 2- he is a rich guy that gets off on "buying" slaves but treats them fairly. If scenario one is absolutely necessary for the story, then Marcus's empathy needs to be more clear. Like Tony was a test subject and needs to disappear, but he parlays with the buyer for slightly fairer treatment. In order to get Tony's "consent", coerced it may be, he takes care of a family member or dear friend of Tony's. If not even these are possible it should be explained why in some relatable way. Just my 2 cents for improving relatability and story immersion.

6/17/22, 8:16 AM
@Frapsity Thabk you, I love feedback and you make some excellent points. Reading it back i can see i didn’t flesh out Marcuss feelings on what he's doingit, mostly becaue i have such a clear view as to why, but his background doesn't get revealed until later, so i forgot the readers point of view would be that hes a monster. Spectator sees more of the game as they say.