Recent Comments

6/15/22, 1:23 AM
FYI: been a particularly rough couple of days at work and would usually do my final readthrough to fix grammar/wording/spelling issues. I just need some time to myself though, so next chapter will come out in the next few days. Thanks y'all <3

Anonymous
6/15/22, 3:07 AM
@EdIam Cannot wait to see!

6/15/22, 11:41 PM
@EdIam I was about to ask if you will publish soon :sweat_smile: thanks for let us know... I wait for the next chapter ^ ^

6/16/22, 11:23 AM
Today hoping :zany_face:@Math_Reez šŸ’™
D1p
6/16/22, 11:17 AM
Can't wait to read more! A very good set-up
Anonymous
6/16/22, 10:22 AM
Can you please email me Jacobstone1980@gmail.com
6/12/22, 11:09 PM
Really enjoying this! Great job!

6/16/22, 9:24 AM
@MicroModal Thanks! I finished the story on my Patreon. Unfortunately the original ending I had violated Patreons terms so I had to change it šŸ™„. I’m hoping my Patrons keep voting for this story to get published to the site so I can post the original ending here.
amul
6/16/22, 8:57 AM
Well-written "frat bro transformation" story. As mentioned by another commenter, the touch of supernatural element (the refilling bottle, the endless rooms, the room that seemed ready for Michael) added to the story. The changes to the eyes of people affected by the toxique was creepy, and I think it was an effective story device. Was the water spiked too, or did Michael ultimately give in on his own? It's fine that we don't know for sure, a few loose threads like that improve a story rather than detract from it.
Terry
6/16/22, 8:32 AM
Is the game you play Vikings war of clans and are u really a player?
Jun 14, 2022
6/15/22, 1:59 AM
Another great story. Short sweet and to the point, yet very erotically charged. I thought the ending just elevated it even further. Kudos to you, even if you added that man-bun as revenge >.>

6/15/22, 9:24 AM
@Essex and if you keep complaining I'll add more man-buns 😌

Blue moon under hell
6/15/22, 9:11 PM
@Twan Andersen please add more man-buns
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/16/22, 4:48 AM
Submission, exhibitionism and humiliation! Rich is one lucky guy!
Anonymous
6/16/22, 3:18 AM
šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„
JPM
6/16/22, 3:18 AM
So sorry to exhibit this story. It is raw! It requires help from the community! There are so many issues to be reviewed, the source voice needs to continue to lead this story! I look forward that the story become the focus!