Recent Comments

amul
6/16/22, 8:57 AM
Well-written "frat bro transformation" story. As mentioned by another commenter, the touch of supernatural element (the refilling bottle, the endless rooms, the room that seemed ready for Michael) added to the story. The changes to the eyes of people affected by the toxique was creepy, and I think it was an effective story device. Was the water spiked too, or did Michael ultimately give in on his own? It's fine that we don't know for sure, a few loose threads like that improve a story rather than detract from it.
Terry
6/16/22, 8:32 AM
Is the game you play Vikings war of clans and are u really a player?
Jun 14, 2022
6/15/22, 1:59 AM
Another great story. Short sweet and to the point, yet very erotically charged. I thought the ending just elevated it even further. Kudos to you, even if you added that man-bun as revenge >.>

6/15/22, 9:24 AM
@Essex and if you keep complaining I'll add more man-buns 😌

Blue moon under hell
6/15/22, 9:11 PM
@Twan Andersen please add more man-buns
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/16/22, 4:48 AM
Submission, exhibitionism and humiliation! Rich is one lucky guy!
Anonymous
6/16/22, 3:18 AM
🔥🔥🔥
JPM
6/16/22, 3:18 AM
So sorry to exhibit this story. It is raw! It requires help from the community! There are so many issues to be reviewed, the source voice needs to continue to lead this story! I look forward that the story become the focus!
Optional
6/16/22, 1:41 AM
Cam can make me a video anytime!
Jun 15, 2022
Anonymous
6/16/22, 12:01 AM
Awesome story! Really liked it!
6/15/22, 11:47 PM
Hola! Acabo de ponerme al día con esta serie y debo decir que es muy buena! Sacando de lado las faltas ortográficas creo que lo que estas construyendo aquí tiene mucho potencial. Me ha encantado principalmente la relación de Max y Antonio, su dinámica, como quiere hacerlo ver su lado oscuro. Que no lo haya controlado... es sublime y amo como poco a poco evoluciona como personaje. Si bien es cierto que me gustaría que Antonio fuera más activo y no el pasivo, no cambia lo que he mencionado hasta ahora. También adoro como las victimas son hombres mayores y velludos, dios mío como amo esto. He leído tantas historias que se pasan por alto estos hombres o los desaprovechan... por lo que la adición del abuelo fue bien recibida por mi parte. En lo personal, amaría si pudieras mostrar como Antonio saca a relucir algún fetiche, como los pies. Pero esto es solo cosa mía. Tu sigue haciendo lo que te gusta que es espectacular y lo amo. No puedo esperar para ver que más sucede!
6/15/22, 10:24 PM
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6/15/22, 11:41 PM
@amul I don't personally feel like expanding the ending would have added much of anything to the story except additional words. I'm quite content with it as is. Everyone's tastes are different of course.