Recent Comments

3/30/25, 6:47 AM
This was a good read. I like longer stories, but sometimes you only ever see 'stories' that are like, maybe a thousand words at most? I like fantasy, I like how human Rock is, and I like the plot so far. The dragon really needs to learn how to talk to people though, he's worse than Rock is at the moment. Yes I'm saying that jokingly, that's not criticism. Dude needs to use his inside voice, hehe. I wasn't sure how to feel about the resurrection part, but then maybe I misread stuff. Are they undead, or were their bodies healed and returned to life? I might have to go over that again, but otherwise good villain so far. Thanks for the story, will be waiting for the next parts.

3/30/25, 11:17 AM
@[BigBroWolf](/user/show/10001489) They are resurrected and he can choose to let them have access to memories or not and depending on how long they were dead also has something to do with it. At first he didn’t have access to fresh kills so to speak and it was more an undead situation. But at Malakar’s current power and mixed with being on the Throne allows him a lot more…choice

3/30/25, 1:54 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) That was what I thought, but I wasn't certain after reading the entire story. That's just my fault as the reader though, I'm sure you made it clear enough in the story. Thanks for explaining it anyway lol.

3/30/25, 2:24 PM
@[BigBroWolf](/user/show/10001489) I Made so many drafts it may have gotten a little convoluted so no issue.
3/19/25, 5:41 PM
We desperately need a tag for humor.

Sss
3/30/25, 1:25 PM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) ^

3/30/25, 2:21 PM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) There *is* a tag "humor". And I've just added it. You can add a tag to any story, too, if you think it's appropriate.
3/30/25, 1:13 PM
What a day! I can feel this story course through me as Connor experiences it. This is also a great series on hypnosis in general and what it can and can not do. It should be taught in every Hypnosis 501 class since it's so advanced.
3/30/25, 12:21 PM
great start. hope he lures Dean to fetishes, like skinhead or leather.
3/30/25, 11:10 AM
i'm really looking for to the next chapter
Anonymous
3/28/25, 3:36 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter

3/30/25, 11:03 AM
@Anonymous Chapter 3 is coming soon thanks😘
3/30/25, 10:13 AM
Love that if the boys don’t play along their size changes will be permanent
3/30/25, 8:40 AM
Like this already, especially since we got a big beefy tusky boi.
Gio
3/30/25, 7:40 AM
the idea of ​​two endings sounds good
12/25/23, 4:08 AM
i’m original author fans,but…he have authorized to you? i also read this you guys english websit through translation feel very famillarize with… the result really is… if consent is not obtained…you desision affirm no OK~ it can be considered as stealing someone else’s work

Zander
3/30/25, 12:01 AM
@[施建群](/user/show/10031530) Hi, do you know where I can read the new chapter of this story? I'm looking but I can't find it (please tell me).

Anonymous
3/30/25, 6:53 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) https://lmbooks.com/?act=showinfo&bookwritercode=EB20230904060514870139&bookid=197361&pavilionid=a