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6/9/22, 10:22 PM
Continue?

6/10/22, 3:18 AM
I might eventually. It was intended as a once off but I may spin it out into a longer one if I get the inspiration. @Maxigay

6/12/22, 12:07 AM
@Alpha Artemis Please...
6/11/22, 11:49 PM
SO excited for more!!
rwriter51
6/11/22, 6:04 PM
The juxtaposition of the innocent "Donkey", and the corrupting influence of Matty is really hot. I wonder what would happen if Sammy were to visit the school as he decides which universities to apply to. You know, a "special guest appearance". It would be another battle of the Alphas.

6/11/22, 8:19 PM
@rwriter51 everything would be made better with more Sammy :)

rwriter51
6/11/22, 11:44 PM
@Jack Parker Yeah, baby!!
6/11/22, 11:06 PM
I loved the vibes of the weird eldritch horror feat house! it made this a fun take on the whole "gets magicked into joined a fraternity" story trope
6/11/22, 11:04 PM
I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I feel like this alternate chapter perspective worked a lot better than the twins and johnathan’s alternate chapters because we actually got something new to the plot whereas the brothers’ were essentially just a copy/paste of Pryer’s perspective with only a new POV as the difference. The Zachary/ Johnathan “bromance” is actually a very fun dynamic that I enjoyed. I hope we get to see them tag team again and torment/dominate the twins for their pleasure! PS, I also really liked Larry’s little perversion where he prevented Zach from taking a shower so he could be more musky and delicious. I really approved of that ;p
12/12/19, 3:51 PM
Thanks, dudes! This was a ton of fun to do, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Anonymous
4/8/21, 4:12 PM
@S. Q. Neemie it's a great story! would love to see more from many of the pairings--especially the army guy/saudi, the manager/employee, and the teenagers! It looked like those could be really fun threads to continue separately

6/11/22, 11:02 PM
@AnonymousI agree with the teens and the army guy/saudi sequels and I'd add the dad 'helping' the kid in auto. I reread this every now and then na dit's hot every time!
6/11/22, 10:19 PM
Glad to see this story is back! Cant wait for more
Anonymous
6/11/22, 8:30 PM
Just terrific!!
6/11/22, 7:55 PM
I honestly never thought I’d ever see another story as good as Top Dawg but you’re really outdoing yourself with this one. Incredible!

6/11/22, 8:19 PM
@baritonegeek wow thanks man!
Jockmorphr
6/11/22, 5:21 PM
Wow. This story is an erotic powerhouse! I love the corruption, the drugging, and especially the farm-grown naïveté that makes the whole thing even hotter. I can’t wait to read more. I’m especially curious about the relationship between Matty and Dane. Great job @Jack Parker!

6/11/22, 8:19 PM
@Jockmorphr thanks man, I love for that corruption in my porn!