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Anonymous
6/11/22, 8:14 PM
Can't wait to see more of your work! (On this but especially on Forced Family Bonding)
6/11/22, 7:46 PM
Perfect seduction of an upstanding guy into a frat bro. Slowly but surely, succumbing to the frat, with no possible escape but surrendering to the vapid happiness of frat brotherhood sex and fun.
6/11/22, 7:35 PM
Another great chapter on seems to be Buck’s road to eventual corruption. It’s all make believe, of course, but there’s something so erotic and hot and ‘can’t take your eyes off’ a scenario where the chaste, upright young man is introduced to and slowly succumbs to the lusts of the flesh. Well done, Jack!
Kip
6/11/22, 6:30 PM
Ok this is super fun. Don’t have time to read the rest just now, but I can’t wait! Great twist on reality-changing statements, and I can’t wait to find out how it keeps going and ends up. Great start!!!
Jun 17, 2021
6/11/22, 5:32 PM
Great first story.
Chase
6/10/22, 3:11 AM
So hoping Zach ends up in love with Larry again. Also totally good with Mr. Pryer destroying Benjamin's marriage 🙂

6/10/22, 3:14 AM
@Chase I love the mix of the hope for Larry and the support of the evil tist with Benjamin 😜

Chase
6/11/22, 5:30 PM
@EdIam I hope if Benjamin's marriage is destroyed its a slower process, not just an immediate command he doesn't want her anymore. Make it a horrible break up 🙂. I also love so much that the most vulnerable and youngest, the twins, are so totally corrupted and are treated the way they are. Something hot about taking the weakest who are protected and completely destroying them.
6/11/22, 4:15 PM
This is so good and yet Im so scared of reading Edlam’s series. 😂 Getting blueballs in the middle of so many leftover series is not funny.

6/11/22, 4:28 PM
@TcomJ I can assure you, this one is actually done!! Just putting finishing touches on the epilogue this weekend! Two more chapters 🥰
6/11/22, 3:49 PM
All's well that ends well, huh? I liked that different type of anti-toxin, creative story device there and interesting to imagine how it might interact with different personality types. Nice to see a happy ending. :)

6/11/22, 4:15 PM
@Zhuge_Lin :grin:
6/11/22, 4:12 PM
Always looking out for your work! Hope this gets further developed!
6/11/22, 3:51 PM
Wow. This is a really fun story. I love all of the characters. The sex is hot too. The best thing is that ending. Dustin being Dustin even then, sipping Zylan’s wine, cracked me up.