Recent Comments

6/11/22, 3:49 PM
All's well that ends well, huh? I liked that different type of anti-toxin, creative story device there and interesting to imagine how it might interact with different personality types. Nice to see a happy ending. :)

6/11/22, 4:15 PM
@Zhuge_Lin :grin:
6/11/22, 4:12 PM
Always looking out for your work! Hope this gets further developed!
6/11/22, 3:51 PM
Wow. This is a really fun story. I love all of the characters. The sex is hot too. The best thing is that ending. Dustin being Dustin even then, sipping Zylan’s wine, cracked me up.
hairyartist
6/11/22, 3:07 PM
Great Job, thank you!

6/11/22, 3:34 PM
@hairyartist more than welcome
6/11/22, 2:51 PM
You defintely have a direct line to the fantasy center of my brain. If I hadn't just overspent on my own vacation, I'd be saving pennies for a commision myself!

6/11/22, 3:34 PM
@THAT Steve haha I just did the same!
Jerry
6/11/22, 12:03 PM
That was fantastic.

6/11/22, 3:34 PM
@Jerry thanks!
6/11/22, 3:26 PM
Very hot. I love that Chance gave himself a big dick :) The sex outside was hot all around. I’m not into sex with women, but do like the way the promise breaking from all of the straight guys is twisting the campus. That is likely what would happen if a bunch of straight guys got that power and it was slowly corrupting them. That was a nice twist having Travis admit that he felt guilty about things. I’m looking forward to more shenanigans and things coming to a head. I’ve really enjoyed this story.
6/11/22, 1:59 PM
So excited to finally read the final chapter. Is there gonna be an epilogue on the smutty scenes of Brendan daily lives going forward? The build up tension was amazing just felt that the ending need a little more oomph to it; or it's just me not being satisfied yet. Great work

6/11/22, 3:10 PM
@chocopanda, wanting that “oomph” was why it took so long to publish. I’d like to have a follow on in which Steve goes to university and maybe gets a new target, with Brendan and some of the other characters making some appearances in that.
hairyartist
6/11/22, 3:02 PM
Thanks Man! a great beginning
Jun 10, 2022
6/11/22, 2:51 PM
Good story and would love to see it continue with help from Jay spurring things along.