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6/11/22, 11:38 AM
Well i for one have never read a story quite like this. :satisfied: Your descriptions are great, really vivid imagery.
6/11/22, 11:34 AM
I love the supernatural edge to this story. The frat bros are like sirens almost, with Michael and Michael alone being summoned there.
Anonymous
6/11/22, 9:35 AM
Really hot story! And the end was hot as well, thank you!
6/11/22, 12:47 AM
Just a small thing that took me out of the story, competition swimmers, divers and water polo players wear speedos. Period. It's not different in flyover states, and the social shaming of wearing them is every bit as intense in California (where I was raised, and was on a swim team) as it is everywhere else. Kids who can't handle it get out of the sport. It's the same with wrestling and their singlets, and gymnastics and the leotards.

Anonymous
6/11/22, 4:17 AM
@amul Not true any more. I came from watching a meet tonight and most of the guys wore jammers. Even a lot of the Olympic athletes have started wearing them -- the claim is that the new fabrics glide even better in the water than shaved legs.

6/11/22, 4:32 AM
Oh yeah, I forgot about the arrival of jammers! Regardless, jammers in no way shape or form cover the junk differently than a speedo. It's the same fabric and weight, just goes down the leg. If you feel exposed in a speedo, you feel exposed in a jammer!

rwriter51
6/11/22, 5:51 AM
@amul I wrestled (in SoCal) about a thousand years ago. We were going to switch to singlets but some parents raised a stink (including my uptight mom) because heaven help we should be able to show off our assets. :rofl: :men_wrestling:

Martin
6/11/22, 6:01 AM
US people are weird. Here in Germany, all the boys at the lakes and pools always wore speedos when I were young. No matter the age. Even elderlies. Boxers were the exception. And nobody thought anything weird about it. Only in recent years, boxers become more and more common. But I still wear speedos only. I'm not going to change just because of US prudes.

6/11/22, 6:16 AM
@Martin US people are very weird.

6/11/22, 6:18 AM
@Martin Nor should you. The prudish disdain for speedos is absurd. Sadly, I've heard it's even spread to Australia now. The entire Anglosphere should be regarded with supreme skepticism.

rwriter51
6/11/22, 8:25 AM
@Martin I lived in Miami and Miami Beach for several years back in the 80's and 90's. Everyone there, except for American tourists, wears Speedos. When I moved there I bit the bullet and bought a pair. What a feeling of freedom and sexiness they gave me. Everyone should wear them at least once. And don't get me started on how prudish guys are these days. I mean, when I went to school it was mandatory to take a shower after gym class. Nowadays it's optional, or they wear their shorts in the shower. And am I the only one who's noticed that straight guys will always turn away from you when the are getting dressed or undressed? I guess they don't mind you looking at their sweet bussy. :innocent:

6/11/22, 8:28 AM
@rwriter51I've found the turning away thing is fear their dicks will be judged. On my baseball team those of us with the biggest cocks had no problem showing it when they changed, it was the ones with the smaller ones that turned away.
6/11/22, 7:44 AM
One of these days! :)
Jack
8/26/20, 2:21 AM
Can you please add another chapter? It's been a while since the last one. Great story!

6/11/22, 7:01 AM
@Jack yes! It’s been added now!
8/29/19, 6:05 PM
I'm a little surprised by Steve here as he usually is a bit mire intelligent in his actions. That said, to the writer, awesome stuff. I like how things are progressing.

6/11/22, 7:00 AM
@Heru Kane, it’s more that he is getting more confident in his ability, so he doesn’t mind taking more risks.
Sexcrab
8/29/19, 4:42 AM
Great plot twist, finally some development and wow! So good! Finally we know more about Brendan and what he really thinks about Steve. It seems our apprentice of hypnotist will have improve his approach if he want Brendan sucking your dick for the next years. Another thing: How many and what are Steve's slaves? It is quite confusing because not only does Steve already have many slaves obtained from previous stories, but he seems some obtained off-stories. Moreover, the descriptions are vague to the point that one cannot differentiate from one another. So in the next few stories I would like you to eventually point out characteristics (hair color, body type) when referring to someone, even superficially. Please, don't understand as a harsh criticism, I like this series very much, only those points that bother me a little, ok? Good luck and great writing to you!

6/11/22, 6:58 AM
@Sexcrab thanks for your feedback. I get what you mean - all of the characters are so clear in my head. Let me go through them: Gerry (Steve’s first subject) - About 5’ 10, brown hair, greyish green eyes, sun kissed skin, big teeth for a big smile. Aidan - same height as Gerry, brown shaggy hair, blue eyes, not tanned but also not pale, high cheekbones but isn’t athletic. Neil - Aidan’s bff, same height as Gerry, brown hair with dark brown eyes, skin is naturally tanned too and gets a bit darker in the sun, he has a bit of a baby face and some fat too. Lee - tall, around 6ft and slim, with a nice tight body, blue eyes and brown hair that is kept short, really smug smile and a bit full of himself. Darren - our bi-curious character who seems to fancy Steve. Same height as Gerry, strawberry blond hair, blue eyes but a bigger nose. Fit body and paler skin with light freckles. Barry - about 5’10, handsome, black. Black, short, curly hair and brown eyes. Slim body. Callum - shorter, same height as Brendan, around 5’9, blond hair and blue eyes. A sweet face, average body. Sam - Callum’s brother, around 5’10, red hair, blue eyes, fit body. Paler skin than his brother and light red freckles. Calvin - Brendan’s younger brother. About 5’5, small build, blond hair and blue eyes. Sun-kissed skin. Dale - Calvin and Brendan’s younger brother. Similar to Calvin except with brown hair, a little taller and a slightly bigger build than Calvin. Simon - Brendan’s friend. About 5’ 10, brown hair and green eyes. Devious smile and likes to poke fun at others. Fit body from being athletic. Not pale, but not tanned, but would get a little more in the sun. Brendan’s father - looks like Brendan, but older and with a more characteristic nose. Brown hair, blue eyes and tanned skin. Is there anyone I missed?
Jun 10, 2022
Sexcrab
6/11/22, 6:56 AM
This will definitely be the story that I intend follow. Can't wait enough.
7/23/21, 3:48 AM
when's the next chapter?

6/11/22, 6:25 AM
@Horny&Hard it’s out now