Recent Comments

Jack
8/26/20, 2:21 AM
Can you please add another chapter? It's been a while since the last one. Great story!

6/11/22, 7:01 AM
@Jack yes! It’s been added now!
8/29/19, 6:05 PM
I'm a little surprised by Steve here as he usually is a bit mire intelligent in his actions. That said, to the writer, awesome stuff. I like how things are progressing.

6/11/22, 7:00 AM
@Heru Kane, it’s more that he is getting more confident in his ability, so he doesn’t mind taking more risks.
Sexcrab
8/29/19, 4:42 AM
Great plot twist, finally some development and wow! So good! Finally we know more about Brendan and what he really thinks about Steve. It seems our apprentice of hypnotist will have improve his approach if he want Brendan sucking your dick for the next years. Another thing: How many and what are Steve's slaves? It is quite confusing because not only does Steve already have many slaves obtained from previous stories, but he seems some obtained off-stories. Moreover, the descriptions are vague to the point that one cannot differentiate from one another. So in the next few stories I would like you to eventually point out characteristics (hair color, body type) when referring to someone, even superficially. Please, don't understand as a harsh criticism, I like this series very much, only those points that bother me a little, ok? Good luck and great writing to you!

6/11/22, 6:58 AM
@Sexcrab thanks for your feedback. I get what you mean - all of the characters are so clear in my head. Let me go through them: Gerry (Steve’s first subject) - About 5’ 10, brown hair, greyish green eyes, sun kissed skin, big teeth for a big smile. Aidan - same height as Gerry, brown shaggy hair, blue eyes, not tanned but also not pale, high cheekbones but isn’t athletic. Neil - Aidan’s bff, same height as Gerry, brown hair with dark brown eyes, skin is naturally tanned too and gets a bit darker in the sun, he has a bit of a baby face and some fat too. Lee - tall, around 6ft and slim, with a nice tight body, blue eyes and brown hair that is kept short, really smug smile and a bit full of himself. Darren - our bi-curious character who seems to fancy Steve. Same height as Gerry, strawberry blond hair, blue eyes but a bigger nose. Fit body and paler skin with light freckles. Barry - about 5’10, handsome, black. Black, short, curly hair and brown eyes. Slim body. Callum - shorter, same height as Brendan, around 5’9, blond hair and blue eyes. A sweet face, average body. Sam - Callum’s brother, around 5’10, red hair, blue eyes, fit body. Paler skin than his brother and light red freckles. Calvin - Brendan’s younger brother. About 5’5, small build, blond hair and blue eyes. Sun-kissed skin. Dale - Calvin and Brendan’s younger brother. Similar to Calvin except with brown hair, a little taller and a slightly bigger build than Calvin. Simon - Brendan’s friend. About 5’ 10, brown hair and green eyes. Devious smile and likes to poke fun at others. Fit body from being athletic. Not pale, but not tanned, but would get a little more in the sun. Brendan’s father - looks like Brendan, but older and with a more characteristic nose. Brown hair, blue eyes and tanned skin. Is there anyone I missed?
Jun 10, 2022
Sexcrab
6/11/22, 6:56 AM
This will definitely be the story that I intend follow. Can't wait enough.
7/23/21, 3:48 AM
when's the next chapter?

6/11/22, 6:25 AM
@Horny&Hard it’s out now
5/12/20, 8:48 AM
omg this twist is sooooo hot i just came all over myself! i LOVE power switch like this, and to have Darren's thought when he thinks he doing great while he's just going under, that was my favorite thing! great job!

6/11/22, 6:18 AM
@SmwrLs glad I could help with that. 😂 I just write what turns me on, so I totally get you.
rwriter51
6/11/22, 5:55 AM
Another excellent story, Jack. You're great at writing stories with not-so-willing guys getting seduced, a particular fantasy for me. Looking forward to future chapters.

6/11/22, 6:15 AM
@rwriter51Thanks man!
Sexcrab
4/29/19, 3:48 AM
The "how I meet your mother" of gay porn is back.

6/11/22, 6:13 AM
@Sexcrab I lol’d at this.
Anonymous
6/10/22, 10:56 PM
Soooo happy to see this story get finished I Was really hoping Steve would get him . What’s even more weird is I’m chatting to a eye into Hypno at the moment and he wants me to be a pup 😳😳😳🌀🌀🐶🐾

6/11/22, 6:07 AM
Yeah, it took a while, but he got him in the end. Let us know how your pup session turns out. :dog:
6/11/22, 5:50 AM
Hot, very very hot and sexy.