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6/11/22, 3:43 AM
Without Larry's side, this chapter worked a lot better, but I still hope Larry gets a good deal out of all of this. But now, we're ready for the dad, which has been a long time coming, and I can't wait to see what happens!
Jun 10, 2022
Anonymous
6/11/22, 3:09 AM
Loved it!!!
R P
6/11/22, 1:12 AM
Hot start! Can’t wait to see what Matty and Dane have planned next for Buck 😈
6/11/22, 12:50 AM
This was incredible! I wish there was slightly more of himbo Cooper at the end there, but I really liked it otherwise! I hated Cooper so to see him get what he deserved was *chefs kiss*. Good work!
abc123
6/11/22, 12:35 AM
Another great chapter!
6/10/22, 10:47 PM
Just here reading AGAIN. Hoping strongly for more 😜🥰
6/10/22, 9:55 PM
Very hot fanfic! Woof!
6/10/22, 9:36 PM
Such a great reason to cum multiple times in one day! Thanks. Great work.
6/10/22, 7:38 PM
Need to take an editing pass at this one, there is a lengthy repeated segment. For a moment I thought that Daniel's punishment was to be trapped in a Doctor Strange style time loop. The scene was very hot, but to be honest the interruption by Jamel threw the scene off and caused me to lose my boner. Still a great job and I am enjoying the story.

6/10/22, 8:15 PM
@amul thank you so much for bringing that editing mishap to my attention. I honestly have no idea what happened, but I believe I’ve made the necessary edits I understand where your coming from about the Jamel section. My intention was to find a way to flesh out caging officers and expand upon them. I can only apologise to your boner, haha Thank you for the feedback and I’m glad you’re enjoying!-

6/10/22, 8:26 PM
@SlaveBoyJG You're welcome and thanks for sharing your story! Regarding the Jamel situation, my recommendation is to handle character introductions outside of a sex scene. The issue (specifically) is that as soon as Jamel appeared I became distracted by the myriad possibilities of his presence. Was he there to fuck? (yes, it turned out), was he there to stop the action? Is he James' superior and going to flip the tables on James? There's too many possible branches to consider while still retaining the charged eroticism that you want building during a sex scene. You have left the reader in the dark as to the background of these shadowy and seemingly omnipotent Cagers. My personal theory is that Cagers come from the caged boys they torment (who manage to survive with their minds intact). That would explain why the Cagers themselves have big dicks but also throw big-dicked boys into chastity. It would also explain why they have such a sadistic streak and are so sex-obsessed.

6/10/22, 8:59 PM
@amul I find your personal head cannon very intriguing. I like the idea of leaving their background up to the reader’s imagination, make them that much more ominous, but perhaps in the near future I may just have to shed some light on the Cagers. For now, ire let you reader theorise about the officers that lurk in the shadows. For Daniel, I think his story (this one at least) is at its end. He is now another claimed boy. I did have a final part that would further enforce that position, but I decided against it feeling it wasn’t needed. However, I’m debating with myself. Again, thank you. It’s so nice to have constructive chats Ps: you’ve got me thinking of a James & Jamel spin-off
6/10/22, 8:35 PM
This is one of my favorite stories to go back to. I can hardly imagine what life would be like for Piotre going forward. Due to the broadcast of his wish, literally everyone in the whole school is going to dominate him and making him their bitch. He's the underling of all underlings, and even shy nerds are probably going to use him. Not only that, but the way all the teachers are also affected. Goddamn this is hot.