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Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 9:36 PM
Such a great reason to cum multiple times in one day! Thanks. Great work.
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 7:38 PM
Need to take an editing pass at this one, there is a lengthy repeated segment. For a moment I thought that Daniel's punishment was to be trapped in a Doctor Strange style time loop. The scene was very hot, but to be honest the interruption by Jamel threw the scene off and caused me to lose my boner. Still a great job and I am enjoying the story.
6/10/22, 8:15 PM
@amul thank you so much for bringing that editing mishap to my attention. I honestly have no idea what happened, but I believe I’ve made the necessary edits I understand where your coming from about the Jamel section. My intention was to find a way to flesh out caging officers and expand upon them. I can only apologise to your boner, haha Thank you for the feedback and I’m glad you’re enjoying!-
6/10/22, 8:26 PM
@SlaveBoyJG You're welcome and thanks for sharing your story! Regarding the Jamel situation, my recommendation is to handle character introductions outside of a sex scene. The issue (specifically) is that as soon as Jamel appeared I became distracted by the myriad possibilities of his presence. Was he there to fuck? (yes, it turned out), was he there to stop the action? Is he James' superior and going to flip the tables on James? There's too many possible branches to consider while still retaining the charged eroticism that you want building during a sex scene. You have left the reader in the dark as to the background of these shadowy and seemingly omnipotent Cagers. My personal theory is that Cagers come from the caged boys they torment (who manage to survive with their minds intact). That would explain why the Cagers themselves have big dicks but also throw big-dicked boys into chastity. It would also explain why they have such a sadistic streak and are so sex-obsessed.
6/10/22, 8:59 PM
@amul I find your personal head cannon very intriguing. I like the idea of leaving their background up to the reader’s imagination, make them that much more ominous, but perhaps in the near future I may just have to shed some light on the Cagers. For now, ire let you reader theorise about the officers that lurk in the shadows. For Daniel, I think his story (this one at least) is at its end. He is now another claimed boy. I did have a final part that would further enforce that position, but I decided against it feeling it wasn’t needed. However, I’m debating with myself. Again, thank you. It’s so nice to have constructive chats Ps: you’ve got me thinking of a James & Jamel spin-off
Dec 11, 2020
6/10/22, 8:35 PM
This is one of my favorite stories to go back to. I can hardly imagine what life would be like for Piotre going forward. Due to the broadcast of his wish, literally everyone in the whole school is going to dominate him and making him their bitch. He's the underling of all underlings, and even shy nerds are probably going to use him. Not only that, but the way all the teachers are also affected. Goddamn this is hot.
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 8:17 PM
Nice job! This is probably the most accurately toxic story of all of them so far (I haaaaaaated Cooper, nice going). :p I do have one question, though. The ending seems to set up a twist where the "snakebite" was just an excuse to use the Anti-Toxin on Cooper, because the snake is the same color (although the order is different, so I think it might be "Red touches yellow, bad for a fellow/ Red touches black, good for Jack", too?). But Dillon's response to the snakebite seemed 100% genuine, so I'm not entirely sure if it's supposed to be a twist. Thanks for a great story!
6/10/22, 8:26 PM
@Feed Your Head I figured I would keep it vague and people could choose to interpret it how they wanted. Trigger some passionate debates in the comments :satisfied:
May 30, 2022
hornyboy27
6/3/22, 2:26 AM
The team seems to have a lot of pent up frustration at the moment. Keen to see if they take that out on Luke...
Anonymous
6/10/22, 8:35 AM
@hornyboy27 that would be amazing if they did.
6/10/22, 7:36 PM
@hornyboy27 :wink: Stay tuned...
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 6:07 PM
Well I wonder if this chapter will be about Larry (since he was the main subject on the previous chapter) or Zachary (since I think is the one that actually got more corrupted oh the same chapter)... and now I know the answer. I really love this series... can't wait to see how this will end. Rooting for Mr. Prayer here :3 also I love to not need to wait a week until know what changes Mr. Prayer has for Benjamin ^ ^ :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart:
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 6:05 PM
I appreciate the author taking the time to write and post the story This last chapter unfortunately descended into a kind of morality play that drained whatever remaining tension and eroticism built up in the earlier chapters (and began to falter mid-way through). With essentially no agency or active role in anything, Brandon being purely a passive victim elicits less sympathy than he really should given his dire circumstances. As for Joe, at first I felt he read as an abusive boyfriend, but towards the end he was just a vessel for the author to pour contempt into and not a character that could be feared and hated as much as the author intended. Rather than being a fearsome sadist or dominant master, Joe relies entirely on the invincible technology of the collar which allows the author to portray him as an oblivious nincompoop while still absolving Brandon of any agency to escape, fight back or defend himself. This absolutely killed the story for me. If a sub is trapped in a horrible situation from which there is no escape, then I as the reader expect the villain holding him to be smart, competent, powerful - something that justifies the situation. Instead this is off-loaded to an inanimate object and the result is deflating to the story. The resolution is unsatisfying and feels unearned. When Brandon was told about "The Resistance" I inwardly groaned because it immediately indicated two possibilities: Either the friend was lying and it was just a set-up to string Brandon along, or it meant that everything was going to be resolved purely through outside forces that appeared suddenly in the penultimate chapter. Both are bad ways to end the story because in the first instance, we've established that Joe is stupid and oblivious so there is no way he could anticipate that Brandon was suicidal, and the second is just the most boring kind of deus ex machina. I don't offer this criticism to slam the author, this is offered in good faith so that future efforts can be improved. The set-up and world-building was promising but the characters needed work. The villain needed to be less of a caricature, the protagonist needed something to do, and the ending was flawed and needed to be re-written.
Jun 10, 2022
6/10/22, 4:58 PM
Fucking hot stuff! And good writing!
Jan 14, 2021
6/8/22, 8:57 PM
My God, your sensitivity touches me. Marry me!!
6/10/22, 3:47 PM
@Stroppy Author > Marry me!! "How much money do you have?" (Steffi Graf Quote :grin:)
Jun 9, 2022
Anon
6/10/22, 3:21 PM
Me hubiese gustado ver un poco más del abuelo corrompiendo a su nieto