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6/6/22, 7:40 AM
Oh wow! So sweet and wholesome! More! I demand more immediately!

6/10/22, 3:19 AM
@Norismo so glad you read this one! And didn't tell me! Getting through next episode and will have it this weekend for sure!
6/10/22, 3:16 AM
I WANT THIS DONE TO MEEEEEEEE
6/10/22, 2:30 AM
Regardless of how people enjoyed the plot or not, purely just looking at the discussion that it has stirred, I think this story can already claim success and fame! Not only did it gave us sexual or fantasy pleasures, it also made many of us become invested in the emotional and moral side of things, even if only briefly. That is just literary art! :wink: A round of applause and praise to Edlam for his masterful writing skills that I think has gone up another level with this story! :clap::clap::clap::+1::+1::+1:
6/8/22, 3:04 AM
I had to search to find this. It needs to be finished :) Hot story, smart writing and wacky, sexy hijinx must continue! At least, I’d love it if they continued :)

6/9/22, 8:53 PM
Are you reading my mind, @MonsterMash62?? I literally (finally) started on the next chapter last night! I’m still the same streaky writer I’ve ever been, so we’ll see how long it takes. But it’s in progress!

6/9/22, 10:58 PM
@Noam de Pluma Awesome to hear. The huge sweeping changes to the world are incredibly hot and I’d love to read about a few more world changes. Or just explore the current one. Thanks for continuing!

6/10/22, 2:03 AM
@MonsterMash62 I'm excited for this one too!
mikegay4u
6/10/22, 1:22 AM
I think it's one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I've been reading porn all of my adult life and a lot of different versions of story themes. This one has a bit of a twist I've never read before. Excellent. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Cheers.
marc frank
6/10/22, 12:57 AM
this was an interesting idea
Anonymous
6/10/22, 12:54 AM
nice
6/9/22, 4:54 PM
Reading these comments is so fantastic. Love the strong reactions. From my perspective, as I tried to include here lightly, is Larry was still just as guilty of taking a straight guy for his own. Yes, he minimized it and tried to make Zack like it all. But there really is no moral excuse for it. Pryer, while wildly more willing to do it to any and all men he wants, won’t let Larry get away with taking the moral high ground. They’re both perverts who completely took over the lives of someone. And as for Larry…he prolly should have been much more careful with the insane power he’d discovered 🤷🏻‍♂️ Pryer is certainly evil. But he’s being smarter about it.

Anonymous
6/9/22, 8:16 PM
@EdIam well written as always. I also assumed this was a real life parable: the tenured professor will always, always screw over their students ;) can’t wait till Friday’s chapter! Any chance you can tell/warn us on how many chapters you think are left?

6/9/22, 8:17 PM
Three more chapters with the final one having an extended epilogue 🥰

Anonymous
6/9/22, 8:45 PM
@EdIam ooooh, we’re close to the end. Can’t wait, thanks for writing this for us (and timing the releases so well, thanks!)
6/9/22, 8:39 PM
This is awesome hope this continues!
6/9/22, 8:34 PM
Billiant finish to the story!! So jealous of Victor hahaha

6/9/22, 8:36 PM
Thank you! I'll definetly write more stories in the future

6/9/22, 8:37 PM
@BoredSoap please do. You have a gift for writing!!