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6/10/22, 2:30 AM
Regardless of how people enjoyed the plot or not, purely just looking at the discussion that it has stirred, I think this story can already claim success and fame! Not only did it gave us sexual or fantasy pleasures, it also made many of us become invested in the emotional and moral side of things, even if only briefly. That is just literary art! :wink: A round of applause and praise to Edlam for his masterful writing skills that I think has gone up another level with this story! :clap::clap::clap::+1::+1::+1:
6/8/22, 3:04 AM
I had to search to find this. It needs to be finished :) Hot story, smart writing and wacky, sexy hijinx must continue! At least, I’d love it if they continued :)

6/9/22, 8:53 PM
Are you reading my mind, @MonsterMash62?? I literally (finally) started on the next chapter last night! I’m still the same streaky writer I’ve ever been, so we’ll see how long it takes. But it’s in progress!

6/9/22, 10:58 PM
@Noam de Pluma Awesome to hear. The huge sweeping changes to the world are incredibly hot and I’d love to read about a few more world changes. Or just explore the current one. Thanks for continuing!

6/10/22, 2:03 AM
@MonsterMash62 I'm excited for this one too!
mikegay4u
6/10/22, 1:22 AM
I think it's one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I've been reading porn all of my adult life and a lot of different versions of story themes. This one has a bit of a twist I've never read before. Excellent. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Cheers.
marc frank
6/10/22, 12:57 AM
this was an interesting idea
Anonymous
6/10/22, 12:54 AM
nice
6/9/22, 4:54 PM
Reading these comments is so fantastic. Love the strong reactions. From my perspective, as I tried to include here lightly, is Larry was still just as guilty of taking a straight guy for his own. Yes, he minimized it and tried to make Zack like it all. But there really is no moral excuse for it. Pryer, while wildly more willing to do it to any and all men he wants, won’t let Larry get away with taking the moral high ground. They’re both perverts who completely took over the lives of someone. And as for Larry…he prolly should have been much more careful with the insane power he’d discovered 🤷🏻‍♂️ Pryer is certainly evil. But he’s being smarter about it.

Anonymous
6/9/22, 8:16 PM
@EdIam well written as always. I also assumed this was a real life parable: the tenured professor will always, always screw over their students ;) can’t wait till Friday’s chapter! Any chance you can tell/warn us on how many chapters you think are left?

6/9/22, 8:17 PM
Three more chapters with the final one having an extended epilogue 🥰

Anonymous
6/9/22, 8:45 PM
@EdIam ooooh, we’re close to the end. Can’t wait, thanks for writing this for us (and timing the releases so well, thanks!)
6/9/22, 8:39 PM
This is awesome hope this continues!
6/9/22, 8:34 PM
Billiant finish to the story!! So jealous of Victor hahaha

6/9/22, 8:36 PM
Thank you! I'll definetly write more stories in the future

6/9/22, 8:37 PM
@BoredSoap please do. You have a gift for writing!!
6/8/22, 4:09 PM
Still loving this series and the ruthlessness of Mr. Pryer. Still, I hope we'll eventually get to see him slip up and end up falling under the power of the magic words.

Anonymous
6/9/22, 8:30 PM
@Hypnothrill Idk, once those professors get tenure they tend to get away with anything they want ;) Personally, I hope he stays in total control, but becomes a power bottom by then end. I trust Edlam, but that’s what I’m rooting for.
nycboot
6/9/22, 12:59 PM
@John and @RikuS - The "construction" problem is that Edlam characterized Larry in such a way that the reader built up a great deal of empathy for him. If Edlam had made him more unlikable and prevented our empathy, I probably would have been glad to see Larry get pushed out of the picture. As in the Re-Educator, perhaps Edlam likes to build up characters that strongly make readers have an emotional attachment, and then totally quash that as if to shit on readers' expectations (kind of a literary sadist). I have only a little bit of empathy for Zack and none for the Petersen clan. It would be great if Zack came across the incantation and began using it. :)

6/9/22, 5:09 PM
@nycboot I think you've nailed it. I get much more enjoyment out of writing stories that cause an emotional reaction beyond 'that made my penis hard'. No shade at all to people that prefer just a quick masturbation story (I have many that I go back to frequently), but I just like to have characters people root for, root against, and are maybe a bit ashamed/shocked at how much they want an evil tist to get what he wants. I guess the pop culture hypno moments that I grew up with were a bit unsatisfying for me with the 'happy' everything goes back to normal endings. I wanted Mad Hatter to make Batman a cum dumpster without ability to escape that fate :man_shrugging: That said, I completely understand the desire for a balance between the purely 'evil tist wins completely' and 'evil tist loses but everyone is still happy gay sluts'. I just tend to prefer stories in the vain of AgainstMyWill and Wesley Bracken. 'Moral' people made new, even if it affects others lives 'negatively'. All in all though, I love y'all insights. You're all honestly the best community.

Anonymous
6/9/22, 8:25 PM
Well said, @nycboot. Plus, what’s hotter then seeing a hunk that’s been cultivated, groomed and dominated… and stealing him with just a few words? I tend not to read MC stories to see true love prevail myself, I’m in it for the domination and to see ‘wrong’ things happen…but to each his own.