@John and @RikuS - The "construction" problem is that Edlam characterized Larry in such a way that the reader built up a great deal of empathy for him. If Edlam had made him more unlikable and prevented our empathy, I probably would have been glad to see Larry get pushed out of the picture. As in the Re-Educator, perhaps Edlam likes to build up characters that strongly make readers have an emotional attachment, and then totally quash that as if to shit on readers' expectations (kind of a literary sadist). I have only a little bit of empathy for Zack and none for the Petersen clan. It would be great if Zack came across the incantation and began using it. :)

This is so freaking hot !! Are you still updating this ;)?

Wowee this is really snowballing. So much action in that house the place must be close to spontaneously combusting! :rofl: This series reminds me of another family takeover story set I read on here before… Keeping It In The Family by… Hypnotic Subjugation I think? It had a similar structure with each male family member falling like dominoes chapter by chapter. These group incest stories seem to be quite a hit whenever they pop up every once in a while. This one’s been enjoyable and especially this chapter, since the ‘wickedness’ has been cranked up a few notches. The brothers’ dungeon play was hot and I’m glad Zachary could be a part of it. Ahhh Larry… poor boy should have realized that with this level of mind control omnipotence, being dumb and innocent wasn’t going to do him any favours… he probably should have continued his research and developed safeguards of some kind lol. Then again, admittedly I didn’t start reading this from chapter 1, so I don’t know the full picture of how these powers work :joy: I saw twins and incest, thought “ooooooh twincest” :eyes: and jumped into the I think the twins chapter. Anyway the real tragedy here is that Larry got excluded from all the fun. :sob: Pryer is quite the bastard! Still I understand why he did it lmao, and I mean really, with godlike MC powers such as these, no wonder it went to his head, as evidenced by the body count spiking in this chapter. Love what happened to Benjamin. I’m a huge fan of ‘shock effects’ like that. He woke up that morning, kissed his wife, got a phone call, aaaaaaaaaand next thing he knows he’s at some house, stripping and having sex with a strange man he’s never met, his life as he knew it previously gone, finished, over. Very hot. I’m curious to see his new role as Pryer’s sex bull expand, and his former role as basic monogamous husband collapse, never returning home. But what can I say? I’m a sucker for happy endings. :wink: As for Pryer… well, whatever happens, happens. I suppose if something ‘bad’ happens to him, he will have “had it coming” as they say. :zany_face: We’ve seen Larry’s fate… if Pryer is bad, and Larry good in this instance- the bad end unhappily, the good unluckily, and that is the meaning of tragedy! :rofl: We’ll just have to see about Pryer, and what his end will be. I’m not rooting for any of them lmao, just here for the ride and enjoying the hot mind control and steamy sex along the way… particularly excited for Destination Daddy. I wonder what debauched things are in store for him? :smirk: Welp, while I wait I guess I should go back and read the rest of the story lol.

Yeah, it's an amazing story. But knowing you, Edlam, I don't think Pryer will ever slip up, which I find disappointing.

Another incredibly hot chapter, but as much as I wanted to se Mr Pryer succeed, he went from rough dom guy to petty asshole. He really didn't need to touch Larry, and having the chance to have any man, why take Zack away? It could have been an afterthought to make him forget and live his life. For that, I do wish he gets his come-uppance, and Larry and Zach get back together. This chapter kinda switched the tables for me and now I want the petty asshole in his place, and everyone else still gay and perverted but happier without him.

Fantastic story on every level. I hope we get to explore the insulin and meds as a turn on, more in the future...

A good gay system story, nice to see. Thank you

Loved this, great mix of lots of really hot concepts.

Another amazing chapter!!! :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart: I'm in the minority that didn't mind Larry's destiny :sweat_smile: but I like twisted and dark stuff... I hope Larry can't fight back and Mr. Prayer get his ultimate prize :star_struck:

Ch 12??? Wait where is ch 11