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6/9/22, 3:35 PM
Another incredibly hot chapter, but as much as I wanted to se Mr Pryer succeed, he went from rough dom guy to petty asshole. He really didn't need to touch Larry, and having the chance to have any man, why take Zack away? It could have been an afterthought to make him forget and live his life. For that, I do wish he gets his come-uppance, and Larry and Zach get back together. This chapter kinda switched the tables for me and now I want the petty asshole in his place, and everyone else still gay and perverted but happier without him.
Jun 8, 2022
Doug
6/9/22, 3:30 PM
Fantastic story on every level. I hope we get to explore the insulin and meds as a turn on, more in the future...
Anonymous
6/9/22, 3:18 PM
A good gay system story, nice to see. Thank you
6/9/22, 2:58 PM
Loved this, great mix of lots of really hot concepts.
6/9/22, 1:23 PM
Another amazing chapter!!! :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart: I'm in the minority that didn't mind Larry's destiny :sweat_smile: but I like twisted and dark stuff... I hope Larry can't fight back and Mr. Prayer get his ultimate prize :star_struck:
6/8/22, 3:50 PM
Ch 12??? Wait where is ch 11

Adonis
6/9/22, 12:28 PM
@mana You're absolutely right. I already have drafts of the chapters in a Google Doc that haven't been revised. I kinda forgot where I was to be honest.
6/9/22, 12:27 PM
I really like stories with happy endings, and I felt like Larry and Zach had that. This chapter sorta ruined it for me :(
6/9/22, 11:27 AM
I love this story a lot. The rubber, the full coverage, the dehumanization, the sex, the submission, the dronification, everything was so exciting !! I felt bad in the moment between the betrayal and the complete dronification, when Gabriel tries to object, but it was short enough for me to go through it to the end of the story.
6/9/22, 11:08 AM
Sweet it's back ^_^
6/9/22, 9:55 AM
I think it was a mistake letting Larry leave without being utterly devoted to Pryer. Even if Pryer isnt interested in Larry in the slightest, it wouldnt have hurt him to make the only other person who knows about what is actually happening a devoted slave as well. Not unless it is a potential plot for Larry to return :)