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Anonymous
3/1/25, 8:01 PM
Any News?

3/2/25, 1:35 PM
@Anonymous I'm about 2000 words in. I'll try to post something this month.

Anonymous
3/14/25, 2:53 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Update soon?

AAJ
3/20/25, 8:38 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Good to hear! This has been one of the best series on here to edge to haha

JX
3/29/25, 11:30 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Update this weekend?
3/29/25, 5:35 AM
The lack of after care for the dom and sub and lack of any prep either just doesn't really feel enjoyable.
Plague
3/29/25, 5:27 AM
Have to say this was a great chapter, and I loved it. I’m very happy you had Jamie ask those moral questions of himself. If you’re looking for ideas for how Jamie could ethically cookie another dilf, I’d recommend a guy who is already gay but wants to be a more confident bottom. Though you’ve done well enough on this series you don’t need any advice from me, just felt like sharing an idea I had. The amount of racial discussion in this chapter was just perfect. Not so little it was ignored, but not so much it became a point of focus. Excellent balance. I also like how you made Jamie and Hayes be upset about something that logically shouldn’t be a problem, but their gut reaction is to be pissed off. Felt rather sincere.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
3/29/25, 3:49 AM
Excellent story! The movement from friend or, in this case, roommate, to obedient servant is not an easy one but a very satisfyig one. Thanks for the story, Sir.
3/29/25, 3:40 AM
If your up for it, another chapter (or more) of their life together as David tighting the rules and formality would be amazing plz?
3/29/25, 3:35 AM
Please renew this series, it's one of the best I've read here. I've read it several times and I always come back here hoping for a sequel.
Anonymous
3/29/25, 3:29 AM
Can't wait for more of this amazing story. (REALLY hope there's something involving the cage and Ivan at some point)
mbblover
3/29/25, 2:38 AM
DomBottom... you have a dirk superman story on the near horizon! oh lordy be! right up my alley! love LOVE superheroes stories where the superhero is beyond straight and is captured, conquered and converted (but not made effeminate, just submissive) to a "lesser". It's perhaps my favorite erotic fiction (and porn) storyline, the whole power control role reversal, where a super alpha is taken down by a "lesser" thru various means (drugging, brainwashing, hypno, etc) and when I say a "lesser" I mean the old unattractive bony man, the overweight plain looking man, the teenage twink, and so on.... the great writer Kyle Cicero's stories and books comes to mind in this regard, since ALL of his stories are based on this theme... Have you thought about creating a made up superhero story? I always thought a superhero called I don't know maybe SUPREME MAN who is based on the fantastic gay artistic creation known as david mccallister (david man of steel and blue eyed beast are the two monikers given to this art creation) would be so hot for a story such as this! basically a 6'5 375 pounds of huge hairy musclebound so handsome it "hurts" to look at him, whose superhero outfit is beyond erotic and blatant (think leotard material of light color with a huge "V" down his upper body showing off his huge musclebound hairy chest and cut down very low near to his waist, and not much left to the imagination from the front or back, but the public overlooks this because he is SUPREME MAN, the ultimate masculine male on the planet and a moral and ethical being... think old school all time hunk CLINT WALKER on steroids! laugh!.... Okay, sorry i'm rambling... thanks again!
3/28/25, 11:40 AM
Love the premise. Would love to see more...

3/29/25, 12:02 AM
@[Ed2you2](/user/show/81593) Thanks!
3/28/25, 12:11 PM
Love the concept. But, like the others can't wait for some hot stuff. Lots of potential here. By the way read some of your other stories. Totally enjoy your ideas.

3/29/25, 12:01 AM
@[Ed2you2](/user/show/81593) Thanks for reading! I definitely want to continue this series still.